|Reviews for Artemis|
| dee.reid76gmail.cpm chapter 15 . 4/24/2011
This story is sooo hot. I JUST discovered it. Will u finish? It's sad that Edward feeds off of humans. That's definitely off. Even his worst our Edward would never kill a child. That's just so so wrong. Other than that I love your writing style. So H.O.T. Write-On
| erika shoval chapter 15 . 1/6/2011
YOU IS EXTRAORDINARY. YOUR WORK IS VERY GOOD, and I appreciate, THANKS FOR THE GREAT MOMENTS OF PLEASURE
| erika shoval chapter 10 . 1/6/2011
Great chapter. I loved the smut in this one
| erika shoval chapter 9 . 1/6/2011
Good charater developement
| erika shoval chapter 8 . 1/6/2011
C'ETAIS UN PARFAIT CHAPITRE ...J'AI ADORE CHAQUE MOT...
| erika shoval chapter 6 . 1/6/2011
YOUR WRITING IS LIKE A GOOD WINE,I JUST DONT WANT TO YOU
| erika shoval chapter 5 . 1/6/2011
JE NE COMPRENDS RIEN ILS SONT VEGETARIENS OU PAS?
| erika shoval chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
thank you for those wonderful moments.
| erika shoval chapter 3 . 1/5/2011
| erika shoval chapter 2 . 1/5/2011
So very interesting, your idea is really unique.
| All But Faceless chapter 15 . 11/30/2010
i like it so far
cant wait for more
Best of luck
| love109 chapter 15 . 9/9/2010
update soon plz cant wait
| ntina prs chapter 15 . 8/27/2010
ok, may i give some advice? i've today both of your stories and i really have the need to recommend to you. firstly even if i'm kind in favor of your way of thinking, you should really consider being more gentle. i see you have a pattern on the unfoldment of your stories- or so far- and i strongly believe, and please no harm intended, but you have to be more smooth on the progressing. what i'm bubbling is that you wanted to force bella and edward on each other and while the sexual tension flows,love feelings are found... however you should describe the principial pull on each other deeper and longer, so that when the things take there way the reader won't be surprised, -well as surprised he can be with inevitable ending, haha-... also it could be a good idea in case you write another congerer story, to change the characters at least a bit, for instance make alice jealous and not understanding, or make jasper feel protective over bella...i hope i've a bit of a hepl, it would be great if you responding telling me your own thoughts
twilight around...the moon soon will rise...an eclipse shall come...followed be the dawn...
| BronzeHair chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
EMMETT! HAHAHA. I love how Emmett interrupted their...um...sexy party. Couldn't he hear them though? Dude's a hot vampire, he should have super hearing.
| A Sirius Individual chapter 4 . 4/25/2010
Failcakes Edward, failcakes.
Woohoo! Flowers for Alice