Reviews for All I Ever Wanted
coraline chapter 5 . 12/21/2010
maybe make the monolouge actually a note instead i dont know to meet him i dont know somewhere because aphrodite istn really dead or somethin

p.s i am really confused by this storry is this like after awakened or somethin could u plz write a description in the nxt chapter thx xx
rosalinda316 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
OK this is odd/amazing. You may not belive it, but my real name IS Desiree...


The story is quite interesting so far- but from a whole 'nother point of view, because of a shared charecter name.

Keep it up!

Desiree (the real Desiree- no offence)
HoN and Harry Potter fangirl chapter 5 . 3/21/2010
Hey!I love your story and Desiree!I'd like 2 c Zoey with Desiree comes in the know about Aphrodite comes back like she is..a human!

And Nyx gives Desiree another affinity!Thank you byes!
Teresaglasco chapter 5 . 5/20/2009
Okay, where is this story leading. You have not updated the story in a while. I am very interestd to see what happens next.
punkbookworm chapter 5 . 5/6/2009
ooh you should definitely keep writing i so want to know what happens next.

update soon.
Thalia-Luke chapter 5 . 3/29/2009
very interesting story. I like the way it is written. Cant wait for more.

ste11una chapter 5 . 2/26/2009
Poor Des.

I would hate to have my mentor put that pressure on me.

Silly Skye.

Intent on getting a teacher to want a student.

What could possess her to do that?

Haha, and I'm sure someone wants her.

You described her as beautiful.

I wonder why she thinks that way.

Anyway, I'm loving your story so far.

I hope you update soon.

Even though it seems like you've stopped updating.

Which really is a shame.

You're a good writer.

And I would love to see where this story is going. ]

ste11una chapter 4 . 2/26/2009

She's getting suicidal mighty quickly.

I love her attitude, though. _

And Erik's defense.

Awesome, awesome.

WHY would Neferet give Erik a fledgling who has stage fright?

Stupid, evil, meanie High Priestess who needs to go away!

Gr! :[

Anyway, awesome chapter.

Going to read the next one now. XD
ste11una chapter 3 . 2/26/2009
Awesome affinity!

Could come in handy in the real world, too. -_-'

Haha, I loved the name of this chapter, by the way.

Is that cat going to be Desiree's now?

Well, duh, Stella. That would make SENSE.

I love her resolve-to annoy the heck out of Erik.

Go Des! XD

Loved the chapter; on to the next one I go!
ste11una chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
And...she meets her roommate!


She picks up on a lot.

-The whole Zoey/Neferet feud, I mean. ]

I wonder if she's going to end up friends with Zoey.


Anyway, awesome chapter (again).

I like your characters so far.

And you're doing great with the Casts' characters.

Which, as for my previous assumption, I guess I don't remember the professors' physical appearances correctly. /

Silly me. Lol.
ste11una chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
Sister Alice is so nice! _

Is Desiree Neferet's child?

That was my first thought, but I can't remember what color Neferet's eyes are, so...?

Anyway, amazing first chapter!

I loved the explanation of the orphanage.

And the Sisters.

And of how she was dropped off especially. XD
ColonKellyHigginsGoil304 chapter 5 . 12/16/2008
Bravo! Bravo! haha, great job, please continue D

ColonKellyHigginsGoil304 a.k.a Rachel
bellacitron chapter 5 . 12/12/2008
gotta love them tacos...
bellacitron chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
ShyNotScared13 chapter 5 . 12/1/2008
It's kindof confuzzling, but good...i really think you should have at least be comfortable around zoey, and that you should have zoey and erik get back together...oh well, that's just my opinion...)


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