|Reviews for Learning to breathe|
| Not the author chapter 2 . 9/8
Fantastic fanfiction; a true standout fic in its genre. This reader cannot wait to see more from the author; hopefully such a budding talent will find recognition for their exemplary work. Brava, WaffleStomper, brava.
| pokemaster101 chapter 10 . 10/23/2012
Oh. My. God. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDDDDDDD
CONTINUE! With the hilarity and yaoinessssssssssssssssssssss sss
Keep it up! 8DDDDD
| wishfulliving89 chapter 10 . 8/22/2012
love the story so far. very funny an cute an sweet. so cant wait for the next chapter of this story.
| Sonorous Serendipity chapter 10 . 6/14/2012
The ending made me die. XD UPDATEE.. I wanna see how everyone else reacts to Light's little outburst.
| theultimatewin chapter 10 . 10/23/2011
Great story! Please update really quickly!
And you're not the only one, because I imagine that their room has a four poster, too. I think it is chesnut or cherry wood, with red curtains and gold design. Kinda like a Harry Potter bed.
| Callmepapercandycornyay chapter 10 . 5/1/2011
This fic is awesome (for lack of better word) And as far as the whole seme uke thing, (dear gawd, alot of ryuzaki fans are gonna hate me for this) but, personally, i'm a fan of lightxl over lxlight. L is just so weird and cute; the way he's always curled in some odd position and not to mention the sugar fetish. I know, I know, you cant have Light Yagami, kiss-ass boy wonder and chief of police's son with perfect hair and genius TOPPING the one character in DN that absolutely rocks catagory "imperfection". And believe me, after Rem killed L, I lost respect for Light altogether. But...mpreg L has always made me eek . so uke L has sorta become a fave of mine. But its your fic. You can do as you like.
Oh and another reason I figure this would be lightxl is also because the state you put L in as far as having broken limbs and being slightly immobile to some things. I dont think L could top light when he should be recovering. But thats me.
Great fic. Faved.
| Aekinia chapter 4 . 11/3/2010
no, it's DEFINITELY not just you; tormenting Light is just about one of the most amusing things ever! I absolutely love it! It's even better than a delicious, sugary, marshmallow-y, whipped cream-filled cup of steaming hot coffee (and coming from ME, that's saying A LOT)!
| Insanity Breaking Point chapter 10 . 6/24/2010
lol, the end of this chapter had me laughing. :) Though, it's kinda funny how Light is in slight denial. :P Update soon! :3
| Wicked Cheshire chapter 10 . 10/15/2009
Haha woow, that's awkward.
It's been a while, like almost a year since you've updated.
But I'm an optimist.
So hopefully you'll update soon!
| Tastes Like Madness chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
okay so this is before ligh got his memorys back then? cause i was kinda of confusied.
| Naruto Uchia chapter 10 . 5/24/2009
... five months and no writing, By my calculations you should have written 3 if not 4 per month which leaves me with a 90% on odds that you have just flat out given up the story correct? It is good none the less.
| bookenworum chapter 10 . 5/10/2009
what he's saying doesn't end up xD
“I promise I shall be entirely honorable.”
“Get your hand. Off. My. Thigh.”
I like how you dealt with their emotions :)
however, L calling Light 'darling' was a bit weird xD
Light spat out his coffee. “L-lover’s spat?” Did he know…?
he almost gave himself away~!
Light-kun, finish this and maybe we can go to bed early tonight ;)
Light slammed down the top of his laptop. “That’s it, Ryuzaki! I’m not going to be your fuckbuddy!”
Everyone in the room fell silent. Finally, Soichiro broke the silence in a weak voice: “L, I thought I told you I was not happy with your relationship.”
xD, I can totally imagine that happening, I don't know if I should feel sorry for them or laugh.. :p
I always think of it as a four-poster, maybe with a canopy.
no, I don't have that.. it would be awesome though xD
here's my review, I'm hoping you'll update this sometime, but I guess not since it's been months..
however, I enjoyed reading it :)
| bookenworum chapter 6 . 5/9/2009
I like the emotional build up, if it's OOC of him is the least of my worries. :)
you're doing great :)
| bookenworum chapter 5 . 5/9/2009
Agh... I started this series with Light's english name and now I'm really regretting it... I can't change it in the middle either. Never going to do that again.
why are you regretting it?
it's not like many people mind,
I just read over it.
like 'Raito' or 'Light'
just like 'L' or 'Ryuzaki'
if it was all Japanese, then L would probably be pronounced as 'Eru'
now, that's something I don't want...D:
shush. you're doing fine.
but there was a tiny plot hole in this chapter, or I missed something..
Shaking his head, he crawled off the bed so as not to disturb L, and walked to the bathroom.
I reckon they're still chained together (why else would light need to sleep beside L?)
the chain is only a meter or two/three long, it would taunt.
it was just a small one, but watch out for them ;)
and the scene with L holding Light was incredibly cute :D
| bookenworum chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
great way to start out :)
I like it, this fic has potential.
the only thing I didn't quite get as to why the hell Light didn't just pull L back with the chain!
then it wouldn't have occurred.
(you wouldn't have a plot, so I guess that's why xD)
especially if he had the time to yell at him to get off the street.
(or were that bystanders..?)
maybe he was just too shocked to do anything (understandable)
but my first reaction was that.
I hope he doesn't have to be bedridden for months though. D:
“Ryuzaki…” Light murmured into the detective’s chest. “I'm sorry..."
And only then, in sleep, did the corners of L’s mouth lift, ever so slightly, at the words.
It's okay, Light-kun. I forgive you.
and it's not really Light's fault, blaming himself is he?
the driver was at fault, and so was L, and Light perhaps a bit for not doing anything immediately. but how would he have know..?
I like that L 'forgives' him for that though :)