|Reviews for Ryouma's Graduation|
| Yozora Haru chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
Oh my god...The lemon...
I guess even for me...it was a bit too extreme(detailed)...
It sure doesn't help that one way or another I'd be having a flashback of lemon I read...(well most of them...)
It have this way to squirm back into my thoughts no matter how many time I tried to push it away...
But still,it was kinda refreshing for Ryouma to be seme(especially since Fuji is the uke...though it would be even more extreme if Tezuka or Sanada is the uke...Seriously,I might even get a shock attack if one of them became the uke of Ryouma)
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
It's Ryoma, not Ryouma. I'm Japanese, btw.
| Oo.SouL.oO chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
Amazing! Just amazing *-* when I read this I had the feeling you knew exactly what you wanted to write :3 And the idea is totally thrilling. I love this story X3
| Cheese Rice chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
this was so cutee w
| tinderbox725 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Trying not to sound like the ultimate pervert that would put to shame even Nanjirou-sama, I totally loved this! Eep. It had the perfect mixture of good narration, proper placement of dialogues and the sm3x was hawt. Hurray for b0ndag3 kink! *blushes like an innocent(wanna-be), then squeals like a true fangirl* If you could pretty please write more of this? :'D
While I'm at it, I'm going to affirm what you said about Ryoma-sama's name's spelling. You are technically correct (though it was written in Katakana and not Hiragana). Though imo since the long vowel is 'inside' the name, sandwiched by consonants, the famous Romanization of just 'Ryoma' was what made sense to non-Japanese (language) natives (just as they write Fuji-sama's as Shusuke instead of Syuusuke or Shuusuke). Besides, as far as I know, there really isn't any exact rule to Romanization of Japanese names/words. As long as they sound the same when spoken, that should be okay, I suppose. But everyone, please let it be known that the 'true' correct spelling of Ryoma-sama's given name is indeed Ryouma, as lemon-and-chai-san pointed out. (I still use 'Ryoma' though since my eyes just scream WTH at the 'ou' for some reason. ::sweatdrop::)
| BLAYNK chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I think this is my favorite echizen/fuji story...
| LostInMind93 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
I haveing no problem with Ryoma as seme over Fuji cuz Ryoma just works perfectly in the role as seme. I love it when Fuji is the ultimate uke in every pair i know aboute. I hope that you will soon continue to write fics like this333 ;)
| MysticPeridot chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
aww... poor fuji...
but i can't really imagine ryoma being taller than fuji...
| yume229 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
that was a nice story! I really like Fuji being an uke...
| Zero-onE001 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
I'm still shocked to even review..
It's just.. Awesome xDD
| Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
First M rated OT5 I've read, very good! I'm quite impressed. It's fairly easy to screw up those kinds of scenes, but you didn't in the slightest. I'm not used to seeing Ryoma spelled with a 'u,' but thinking about it, it really is the more appropriate way to spell it. It just looks weird when you've seen it spelled differently for so long, you know?
I'm sorry your muses got run over... that's unfortunate. Hopefully they revived themselves shortly after. ; I'm still waiting for mine to come back... they've been taking a half-year vacation. Not cool. :(
But anyways... I've just recently gotten interested in PoT fandoms, let alone fivesomes, but I find it both extremely amusing and completely interesting that things like this exist. xDD This is actually the first fivesome I've heard of, whatsoever. Maybe I need to get out more, but I don't really think they're all that... well-known... right? They're certainly fun to read though~
| sosise chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
sorry. i forgot to review. (i have read this for 4 times, i think)
another excellent work. i wasnt that eager for Ryoma (I hate him... kinda), but as Fuji is being the ultimate central uke... i am crushed. ho...
you know i love him as the central uke, and I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES~!
hohoho... make more?
| bl789 chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
i have read alot of fan-fic but i have to say, THIS STORY is one of the best i have read. good work, i really liked it.
| fear-the-soul chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
GOOD JOB!...but I would like to point out one little thing its not spelled ryouma...its ryoma, but other wise it was amazing yay ryomas not uke anymore!
| Clover chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Wow!...this is really something /
If that action isn't enough to grant Ryouma a medal of honor for his graduation...I have no idea what would.
After all he has 4 best teachers to tutor him...
- Thank you for the story -