|Reviews for potato chips|
| sexypancake chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
omg i can't believe you ended the chapter where you did! i hereby file a formal complaint! XD
i think this story was excellent. my favorite of this universe so far. sakura being a grocery fanatic is wonderful. being a ninja, she doesn't necessarily have to worry about getting fat, so she can eat whatever she wants, i think. jewerly and pretty things are nice, but for her lifestyle, i like what you've done. you also wrote mikoto very well. i still can't believe we didn't get to see her reaction to itachi's addmission! this whole chapter was leading up to that moment, and you cut us off! ah! i hope you update either a new story or chapter(preferably) soon. i really wanna see this continued right from the sentence! cheers!
| Burning Impossible chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
lol, i can totally see Mikoto's eyes sorta bugging out at the end - such a confusing circle! well, at least she knows one of her sons is in a relationship! (she can save sasuke later.. pfft)
love love love - plz continue to add on to this Ramen-verse. it's
| ArjunaAnja chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
i thought it was cute how itachi got all protective of sakura when his mother started talking about pairing her off with his brother.
I think it was great idea that you wrote about the market place. I could so see this sakura doing that. It makes her different from all the other sakura versions you've wrote about.
Great job, i love the extra info you put at the end it gives a good background on the subjects.
Hope to see more Reman-verse sequels in the future!
| sadbird chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
woah. that was awesome. You made mikoto act exactly like a mother...hehe especially a mother of those two uchihas. it was really good and i would bet that she really would be curious about everything related to her sons...haha. nice NICE story! i wished to see something going on between sakura and itachi cause i missed that :( i mean i know that the idea of itachi hugging sakura in the middle of the road is just plain weird, but i would like to see something going on between them! that is, if you want to, you're the author ;) and a pretty great one! thank you. your stories always make me feel so good.
| Chaerring Trinity chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
But what does Mikoto say? i love ramen-verse and love their personalities! Grocery shopping isn't weird. Can't wait for the next one.
| yourbrainversusmytractorbeam chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
It was very good- not at all OOC, I don't think. I wish you had written Mikoto's reaction, though- that would have been a soemthing. ahaha. I can't wait for the next sequel )
| kula haruchiyuganarabaku chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Im an avid(abid?XD i suck at english writing...no wonder i dont write fanfics xD) of all your fanfics, the way you write its captivating D ive been reading whatever you write and im totally in love with ur writing whereas it be sakugaara or itasaku(this one being my favorite i daresay) and D for the first time i gathered the courage to write such a long review (not that i use to write them UU shame on me) but im deeply touched by his answer "Me" that would be just so... totally Ita-kun hahahaha btw curtain call always make cry! haha its just like a "perfect normal fairytale" for them... i do like the way you give them(not meaning that history in particular) their own personality...just following what we know about them D!
Long Live 4 Paws-bells fics!
| Marla Juliet chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Well done. I'm impressed. The thought of sakura being obssessed with grocery shopping and dragging itachi as well as sasuke was hilarious. Love it. Keep up your great work!