Reviews for My Addiction
PurpleCat5817 chapter 17 . 11/13/2016
I think this is my second time reading this story and I love it just as much, possibly more! Good job with writing it.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/16/2016
It's nine vehicles. Not ten
Viper5delta chapter 15 . 3/27/2016
OK, this chapter legit made me cry, very well written.
Raven of NY chapter 17 . 2/21/2016
This is Fantastic. Love it. Great job
SourlessCherryxx chapter 17 . 10/11/2015
Dawwwh. This story was beautiful and brilliant. :)
I loved how you wrote their relationship. Thank you for this amazing story! x
Ceeps chapter 15 . 7/17/2015
Omg ok so I finished the story. But this chapter is what every single romance story needs. This is a type of chapter that would make me cry.
Gahhhh ily. I ship them so hard .
Guest chapter 17 . 5/28/2015
THIS WAS AMAZING, By the way, can you make a robin x starfire fanfic plz ._.
NeneJPhilly chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
I love this story & think you're an amazing author (although I have a few issues with various parts of the story [Raven]). Keep up the good work. Seriously, the part where she blames him for went down between them when in my opinion it was her fault... I'm sitting here getting started all over again. Forgive me. The point is that now that I logged in, I can favorite this (& review). So I am. I'm going to stop talking. Again, good story.
Eziza chapter 8 . 5/5/2015
Also the correct phrase is "pray tell" not pre-tell. Good story though
Eziza chapter 9 . 5/5/2015
Gaudy. Not gouty.
DxS4ever chapter 17 . 8/12/2014
Oh my god! I've been looking for this story everywhere. This is one of my favorite stories in the tt category. I'm so happy I found it. You balance sex with plot so nicely. I read this story when u first wrote it but never saved it. The second I found it I just had to reread it, something I never do. So thanks for you beautiful storytelling abilities and this little tale.
Concolor44 chapter 17 . 3/19/2014
A really good story.

Okay, I need to get this out of the way:
The past tense of "lie" in the sense of being prone somewhere is "lay".
- He lies on the ground now.
- He lay on the ground yesterday.
The past tense of "lie" in the sense of telling an untruth is "lied".
That's the only Recurring Theme mistake that I found irritating. There were several others, but they were easily glossed over.

Your plot carried along in a lively and diverting manner, for which I thank you. There were no slow spots.
Your dialogue works. It may not be Terry Pratchett, but it's certainly good enough.
Your exploration into the psyches of Raven and Gar was a sheer delight. And I'm a total sucker for happy endings.

Kudos on an all-around great tale.
Concolor44 chapter 16 . 3/19/2014
Well it's about damned time.
Concolor44 chapter 15 . 3/19/2014
Yeah, Raven, that's not just a little boo-boo you're healing there. It's gonna tear you right outta the frame.
Concolor44 chapter 13 . 3/19/2014
Well that was completely hideous.
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