|Reviews for Taking it serious|
| dmt chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
nice but to short love to expand it a bit to the invasion
(liked with warning protor bit adds told you so model of i trained myself you did pranks lol) not that he had choice poor naruto
| Mach the Cynic chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Epilogue: Ero-Sennin and Sandaime avenges Naruto's death by killing Neji. Gaara kills Sasuke, Sakura, and Kakashi. Not to be outdone, he wipes out root. Sound and Sand successfully destroy Konoha and occupy its remains. Orochimaru kills the Sandaime and Ero-Sennin, obtains the Sharingan from Sasuke, Kakashi, and Danzo, and expands his empire.
Tsunade and Shizune build a casino and become rich off of other gamblers. The Akatsuki find a way to bring Naruto back to life and fuse the Kyuubi with Naruto. Naruto becomes leader of the Akatsuki and takes over the world! The end.
| Urisen chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Jesus that was dark, you've got a pretty twisted imagination.
| violetkisses chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
that was really...sad D: sighs~ i really like naruto. but anyway, kyuubi was so funny. poor naruto and yondaime in the after life.
*is crying because naruto is dead*
| reviewer chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
at least have the decency to put it in the summary next time
not everybody likes this type of fic, other than that I have no problem with you expressing your opinion.
| Eddi chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
... yep, der oneshot gefällt mir und mach weiter so. Vll. kannst du ja was mit Rock lee machen, der denkt ja ähnlich wie Naruto,(außer er trainiert wenigstens dafür und kann es auch beweißen). Wenn ja, dann töte ihn nicht (ich meine auch nicht "kampfunfähig") mach in realistischer... es gibt einfach keine Dark Lee Fanfictions.
| BlackPANDA xD chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
wel that sucked. o.o all yur showing is a bad light on both naruto and neji. ouch.
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
So... yeah, if you weren't such a Naruto hater you would notice several things: 1. Naruto uses a fair amount of strategy as well as luck in his fights. 2. Neji didn't take Naruto seriously at first but as the match progressed he got more serious, and by the time Naruto used Kyuubi's chakra he was pulling out all the stops. 3. Where was Kyuubi in this story? You completely disregarded his healing powers and chakra and gave no legitimate reason as to why Naruto didn't use its chakra. This is a plot hole. If there is a plot hole in the story then the story makes no sense. If the story makes no sense then it is garbage. As was the fight seeing as how it was completely one-sided and uninteresting. My guess is your just a fan who was jealous that Naruto beat up your favorite character so you decided to bash him and glorify you own favorite character.
| SamaelSammy chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
| husk55 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Yes! Garra will now go psycho and kill everyone and everything in Konoha while Sound and Sand destrys Konoha! Tsunade will never change, and will continue to wander with Shizune for the rest of her pathetic life. Inari from the land of Waves would likely seek revenge for Narutos death and will attempt to become a ninja. Through private tutors or a wandering missing nin passing through town is proably where hes going to learn any ninja abilities if you plan to include him.
The atauski will change their plans, and attempt to find valuable artifacts or something in order to take over the shinobi countries. Hinatas death did not change anything, like it did in the series. (seriously she died, I heard about it from many people) The outside world never gets involved, the discovery of gunpowder drives ninja obsolete. In reality, nothing changed, only the series ended the end.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
| QJD1381 chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I loved this. Can you make another ' what if " story like, only with Naruto having Lost to kiba? That would be swell.
| JuMiKu chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Well, this one-shot is well-written and an interesting idea.
Sadly I happen to like this whole "Naruto changing people's lives"-plot, as it is always explained how Naruto's attitude and will changes peoples' outlook on life. Also reading stories where the protagonist wins due to luck against impossible odds is more exciting than just waiting for the super-powered Cannon Sue to make the finishing blow.
| HyugaHiazi chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Wow...I really don't think Neji would have KILLED Naruto but I definately think if he didn't prolong the battle, Neji would have definately won it for sure. If Neji had been attacking him non stop, Naruto wouldn't have been able to keep up. He would have lost! So anyways, great job!
| the grey mage chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
you know when naruto was stabbed clear through, his body recovered. and when sasuke broke his neck, his body recovered. i'm just sayin. i would have thought that kyuubi would come out, and kill every one. everyone. except neji. to show that fate is kind or something.