Reviews for OUTCAST
yuzukikuran476 chapter 8 . 4/11/2016
Poor Naruto And Hinata. Hinata needs to prove to kushina and Naruto And mostly to herself and there away Hinata acting isn't herself and I know angry For Naruto but she needs to understand. Please update
yuzukikuran476 chapter 7 . 4/11/2016
Please update this amazing story
yuzukikuran476 chapter 6 . 4/11/2016
Am Glad that Third Hokage and Mikoto and Inoichi and Tsume and Sayuri and Orochimaru and Anbu all of them saved Kushina please update
yuzukikuran476 chapter 5 . 4/11/2016
Please update this story
yuzukikuran476 chapter 4 . 4/10/2016
Please keep Third Hokage alive in this Story.
I wonder what pairs in this Story:
Naruto x Hinata
Chouji x Ino
Kiba x Haku
Sasuke x Sakura
Shino x Oc
Lee x Oc
Shikamaru x Temari
Neji x Tenten
Please update
yuzukikuran476 chapter 3 . 4/10/2016
yuzukikuran476 chapter 2 . 4/10/2016
Please update this awesome story
yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 4/10/2016
Am sorry for pointing this out but there are some spelling mistakes and capital letters in this Story I thought to let you know other than that this story is amazing and thank you for making this story a Naruto And Hinata pairs and Will kurama (Kyuubi) help Naruto And become brothers and would Tell Naruto about kurama past and his father six path of Sage and it would be cool if Naruto would meet Tsuande and would be cool if Naruto have Bloodline like sub elements like wood Release and please update this amazing story
Guest chapter 3 . 4/5/2016
noah141232 chapter 8 . 12/6/2015
Have you just cancelled this story or something?
mdhunter111 chapter 8 . 10/10/2015
Awesome story so far! Great job! Please do continue soon! Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks, and have a great year!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1/2015
I'm not feeling the revenge like atmosphere
Kourtney Uzu Yato chapter 8 . 6/21/2015
This story kicks f*cking ass! Continue! Continue the story please!
Rice eater chapter 3 . 2/3/2014
The story has good ideas it just needs some polish to be even better.
Put capital letters for the start of any sentence including speech, names as well. So "Naruto!"

Any title or name should have a capital letter. Konoha, Kushina, Uzumaki, Copy Ninja, Sharingan, The Bloody Scythe and so on.

Also split speech up with a blank line. It's makes it easier to read.

"Naruto..." muttered his sister.

The blonde froze stone still.

"What?" he growled.
fusioninferno chapter 8 . 1/30/2014
Really love the fic you have here and hope it's not abandoned. Would like to read more of it soon! : )
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