|Reviews for Where You Go I Will Follow|
| How chapter 6 . 2/28
This makes no sense! How does Ariel not know that this is Flounder. Here is a list of reasons why:
1: They don't have hair color spray so how does she not know that this kid has blue hair just like Flounder.
2: His voice must be exactly the same as his, and nobody has the exact same voice as another person, so how does she not remember his voice? That I don't know.
3: He is always stuttering, which Flounder does all the time.
Also another list of things that don't make sense is:
1: Scuttle isn't smart at all.
2: How does Scuttle find a t-shirt and jeans for Flounder but only a ships's sail for Ariel?
3: T-SHIRTS AND JEANS DONT EVEN EXIST IN THIS TIME!
4: Flounder is really fat as a fish so how is he a skinny kid all of a sudden once he is a human?
5: Isn't Flounder like 10 in this article? Why is Ariel taking a stranger 10 year old boy for a walk and saving him a dance if she doesn't know that it's Flounder?
Think about all of this. Don't take life too seriously.
| Lmb111514 chapter 12 . 11/3/2013
This was great, I loved it!:)
| penny3 chapter 8 . 10/4/2009
You forgot to use quotation marks in this chapter.
Flounder seems to be doing okay as a human...
| Gilbert Winchester chapter 12 . 4/22/2009
That was amaizing, well written, and in character!
thank you for the aweome read
| Gilbert Winchester chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I love flounder/ariel! And I actually found this story by accident, but I'm glad I did, because I LOVE this!
I was actually thinking of writing a story with a similar story line so I was seeing if someone else did anything like i was about to do. Only mine was for Finding Nemo...lol
Can't wait for more! Because this is great!
| jlslash chapter 12 . 12/20/2008
cute fanfic ! thought this pairing once not bad
thought still love Ariel Eric the best !
| zabchan chapter 5 . 12/11/2008
Heh, I have a feeling that flounder in the kitchen might be similar to Sebastian in the kitchen...horror at seeing fish for dinner! At least flounder wont be in danger of being eaten...
| zabchan chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
aren't jeans and a tshirt a bit of an anachronism for ariel and eric's time period? I mean, i know they technically are in a fantasy world, but seeing jeans there kinda broke the illusion for me...
however, you do a good job of keeping flounder's "voice" and his open, friendly, loyal and innocent nature.
| GladeSistas chapter 12 . 12/7/2008
AW! So so cute! I love it, but I'm sad it's over. :(
ARIEL AND FLOUNDER FOREVER! (hug)
| Anna Craft chapter 11 . 11/13/2008
Oh now that was just lovely, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Sorry if I did come out as a little picky or snooty, after all no one is perfect and I go into Beta Reader mode without realizing it sometimes so I am sorry.
I'm only sixteen but aspire to be in journalism so thats why. Just wanted to apologize.
Anyways, I am glad you took some of that advice in because it was told beautifully, you slowed it down some and made it ver enjoyable.
Well I hope to see more from you,
| tasty cheez chapter 11 . 11/12/2008
I liked it. It was very cheesy and very disney-like, but regardless I liked it.
| GladeSistas chapter 11 . 11/12/2008
Aw! That makes me so happy! :D I'm EXTREMELY happy now Tatiana, thank you. :) You don't have to do another chapter, but maybe it would be cool to do a short epilogue. :)
| tasty cheez chapter 10 . 11/9/2008
This chapter isn't bad, but it probably could have been attached to the end of the last chapter
| GladeSistas chapter 10 . 11/9/2008
. . . what the heck? Why did you leave it off? UPDATE NOW!
. . . wow . . . sorry about that. Once I get into a story I can't help being addicted. :) Please update soon, I'm dying to see what happens. :)
It was a good chapter! Don't freak out! :)
| tasty cheez chapter 9 . 11/5/2008
At the end did you mean for ariel to say flounder? or did you mean james?