Oh, please, please! Continue this! I've so in love with your series, so drawn into your universe! I want to see the end of this story! Even if it's not totally a happy ending, but a bittersweet one, I want to see my friends one last time!

If nothing else, write a plot-outline for the unfinished portion! I'm literally begging you!

Very interesting chapter. I wish that new chapter will be published.

Please, Please, PLEASE finish this. I got started and it was extremely interesting. Where did naruto and hinata's relationship go, what new powers does naruto possess, who is the new girl, what are her powers and what is the final conclusion of the war, does naruto become hokage, does he marry hinata, is sasuke dead, does Pain(awesome, fav character) make an appearance. These are just a few of the many question waiting to be answered.

cool

you know what would be totally cool?... if you finished this story! please!

w00t! MORE MORE! this is awesome!

*pokety pokety pokety pokety* Darn it this story's so good. Please update! *pokety pokety pokety pokety...*

:3

Whoot! I'd bet my next pay that Sasuke's back! And I really have no problem with it this time... I almost wish this were canon, (save for the fact that Yondie's parental tags were removed :P). Good job all around; I got directed to your writing by a friend, and did not manage to put them down till I reached the last chapter of this story. Looking forward to more developments, and will proceed to go munch on your Halloween special in the interim (which is really bad for my NaNo stats, I'll have you know :3) Great nod to Japanese history too, btw!

So er...what happens next? Seriously it's far far away from canon, but it's now so far away that one may as well consider it alternate universe and with all the time and energy you've put into this world now you may as well finish the story. Please? heh

I have to think about the girl, and I have the feeling that she's not going to live long, but she still won't die by anyone in Leaf. Keep up the good work, dark

Yes! Finally updated. I'm glad you decided to finish writing this chapter. It was a great read, just like the previous two stories. I hope the rest of the story comes out just as good. Hope you update again soon, and I look forward to reading the next chapter

The hooded man might be underestimating Naruto's ability to effect others. I can't wait to see what happens next. Glad to hear from you again!

Glad to see this continued. I'm interested to see where it goes.

I like nostalgia, especially when it motivates you to post new stuff. So I really like this chapter but the prospect of waiting months for this new cliffhanger to start being resolved isn't looking like too much fun. So I wonder who Sachiko is? Is she a clone of someone or was she captured and just experimented on while in a tube? Well whatever is going on, as always I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Thanks for posting and I hope you are doing well.

Sincerely,

Zach

Well, welcome back! Glad to see you're still alive and well.

Good chapter, as always.