Reviews for Cracked
raphfreak chapter 4 . 1/18/2009
Oh wow! Please will you continue and update? This rocks and I really want to know what's going to happen with Mona Lisa and the others! PLEASE!
tFantasyFan chapter 4 . 12/11/2008
Oh OUCH with the momma's soul comment. That cuts me, it wounds me deeply, and I'm not even sure I believe animals DON'T have souls. Not a fan of Venus OR Mona Lisa, since I don't gravitate towards older series, but I can read this and enjoy it. It's pretty funny, and definitely dramatic. C'mon, Leo, can't you think of ANYTHING? Wish he'd had a bigger part in this chapter, but yknow, I can live without him lol.

Che, bet that ninja felt SO awesome, shocking innocent mutant ninjas. I hope Karai 'awesomes' him right in- er...You know what, forget that last bit. (O.o) I don't like Karai as it is.
anniewanny2 chapter 4 . 12/1/2008
love the flashbacks! escpecially in the previous chapter! when mona met Raph, very creative! I hope you update soon
NightwatchersOnlyGirl chapter 3 . 11/29/2008
When is Nightwatcher going to be in the story
54Viruses chapter 3 . 11/29/2008
I've seen locked dressers before, it's actually pretty simple.

Good chapter.
Tortuguita13 chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
I love this! It's so hard to find a good tmnt story as it is, but your's is wonderfully written. I can't wait for more.
Kelip-Kelip chapter 2 . 10/27/2008
Wow things are getting dramatic... :) I like it!

And I won without actually guessing? Haha it must be my lucky day :)
cate chapter 2 . 10/26/2008
Thank god, had it been any other pairing and I would have stopped reading! It should alswyas be Mona and Raph! I wish there were more stories with the two of them out there. So far, so good, carry on dear writer...
raphfreak chapter 2 . 10/24/2008
WOW! Good stuff, update soon please!
ninjalara54VirusesMondhexefan chapter 2 . 10/24/2008


please dont make me wait any longer... you have jept these characters perfectly in character and there are very rare good fanfics with venus in them.

Well done!

*clicks all alert and favourties options in review window*


cant wait for more!
NightwatchersOnlyGirl chapter 2 . 10/24/2008
I think the father is Leo
Pen gard chapter 1 . 10/19/2008

I like your story...
Mystic-Warrior7 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Who's the Father
Kelip-Kelip chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
I didnt understand the part with Vincent (Van Gogh Im assuming)... Leonardo Da Vinci painted the Mona Lisa... if thats what you were saying, I vote for Leo. If not, I vote for Donnie (although Im not the first one to vote for him) :)

BTW I like the story, I look forward to a baby mutant :) and the turtles are so cute all of them caring for Mona :)
Beccarjane chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
OMG tell me who the father is, please. This is a really good first chapter and has me hooked.
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