| Reviews for Subject: Edward Cullen, aka The Womanizer |
|---|
  Cool Bananas chapter 14 . 10/31/2017 so much going on...Wow! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 11 . 10/30/2017 bold & beautiful... thanks! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 10 . 10/30/2017 Heck! playing with fire alright! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 9 . 10/29/2017 Yeeeeesssssssssssss! Lol! Thanks! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 8 . 10/29/2017 So much fun! Thanks so much! No alcohol taste, imagine that... |
| Cool Bananas chapter 7 . 10/29/2017 Daaah daaah daaah Daaaaaaa! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 6 . 10/29/2017 so much fun & games! thanks! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 5 . 10/29/2017 Wow! X1,000,000! thanks! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 4 . 10/29/2017 These twp are perfect for each other...love all the fireworks! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 3 . 10/29/2017 Boom! love it! thanks |
| Cool Bananas chapter 2 . 10/29/2017 perfect! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 1 . 10/29/2017 oh my goodness! what a treat! thanks! |
 charbronte chapter 26 . 10/18/2017 h |
| Seiiona chapter 42 . 9/3/2017 love the story, but in your last few chapters, there are a few inconsistencies. like the chapter when Edward and Bella are in the temporary home, you spring upon us the name of the twins, yet there was no chapter even leading up to the appointment telling us they were girls. there wasn't even a chapter of them finally moving into the temporary home. there was no chapter explaining why the proposal was put off for so long after her return (and the court case with Angela isn't much of a reason). then in this chapter it says it's 13 months after their wedding, and during their first wedding Bella was around 6-7 months. how the hell did the twins have their first birthday already if they weren't born until after Bella and Edward got married? maybe you were in a rush to finish this story, which is understandable, but those are some pretty important details to include. the sex isn't as important as staying on top of a storyline you created. overall, good work. . . . .. . ... . . .. .. . . ... . .. . .. ... |
| SincerelyBella chapter 7 . 8/19/2017 Bookmark on Ch 7 |