|Reviews for Eternally Intertwined|
| twicrazreader chapter 1 . 8/18
Love this from Edward POV!
| jk chapter 19 . 5/8
What is the point of having Alice meddle so much? It just makes her character more annoying if that's at all possible since I loath her character. Why exactly does Alice get descriptive visions of Edwards sex life but not of important things? It seems that whenever something important arises her visions are fuzzy...how fucking convienant.
In the real world, alice would get bitched slapped. All she does is meddle, shop and annoy people...what a horrible shallow person.
| jk chapter 13 . 5/6
who in the fuck wants a apov? shes nothing but a meddling annoying twat
| jk chapter 5 . 5/3
bella is being really stupid, how in the fuck can she claim to be committed to jake when she just fucking cheated on him?
And you really need to go over this story again...there are ALOT of mistakes!
| jk chapter 4 . 5/3
I find alices character absolutely offensive.. Knowing her brother has never liked ANYONE...EVER and shes all fucking over the girl...like "don't hog her"
Alice is a incredibly selfish piece of shit and I wish she would go the fuck away!
| Guest chapter 38 . 10/26/2016
Edward can't read principle Daggett..or What?
| Guest chapter 37 . 10/26/2016
Angela Should be ok...right? Moody Bella was not good...
| Guest chapter 35 . 10/26/2016
Lemon was good...hot and sweet...love it...now Charlie is a bit overreacting...
| Guest chapter 34 . 10/26/2016
Sapphire and her father is creepy...
| Guest chapter 33 . 10/26/2016
For someone who are gifted...a mind reader...there was a lot of weakness in Edward character...He should knows all the thing...what was on peoples mind all around him...what's they're thinking...except Bella...but yet Edward in trouble almost as he was a human..not a gifted vampire..
| Guest chapter 29 . 10/26/2016
Yea...they make it..without harm done...and So sweet
| Guest chapter 19 . 10/26/2016
Edward better be seek an advise from Carlisle regarding sex-ed...but if he reads mind..that mean he just as good...surely he has had seen it in vamp/humans mind..all the time..
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/26/2016
Yea ...all is good..
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/26/2016
Love this chapter...
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/26/2016
I hate Carlisle...yea Bella is coming..