|Reviews for Naruto: Pieces|
| deadw8 chapter 4 . 5/9/2009
next chit geting good
| Serenarey Chiba chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
Nice story, so far. Could have more detail...but, it's a good story.
| Moon Ecstasy chapter 2 . 12/9/2008
"Come on join the joyride! Join the joyride!"
I like this, I do!
| Moon Ecstasy chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
That was totally Kakashi!
Anyway, great first chap! Now onward I go to see how the rest is!
| cRaZyGuRl093 chapter 4 . 12/1/2008
Uh Oh :/
Orochimaru being back cannot be good :(
Anyways Great chappie :DD
Loved the Kakashi/Naruto conversation...&& the Anko/Naruto interaction :0]
| Lazielow chapter 3 . 11/29/2008
Please update soon.
| KnightStriker chapter 3 . 11/28/2008
Awesome so far.
| iamjustanotherguy chapter 2 . 11/21/2008
This looks good. There aren't many Anko takes care of Naruto stories. I like it, and look forward to the next chapter.
| DrendeSalkash chapter 2 . 11/21/2008
not bad. not too shabby a plot and decent writing. this will go far
| cRaZyGuRl093 chapter 2 . 11/19/2008
Awesome chappie :P
Im glad that Anko accepted to take care of Naruto :DD
Looking forward to the next chappie:]
| CrazyLikeArt chapter 2 . 11/19/2008
Nice story so far, wonder how you'll go with it.
Anyway, feedback time:
when Anko go to see the hokage and thinks about Naruto staying at her place the nights before, you wrote "Not that she didn't mind".
That's a double negation, meaning she minds, I think you wanted to write "Not that she minded".
Then there's the hokage's sentance “So Ive been told that you have met Young Naruto.” you forgot to put the apostroph between I & ve.
I wonder who is his grandfather here.
W&U (write and update)
| cRaZyGuRl093 chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
Awesome story (:
Seriously though...this is the 2nd story that I have read with Anko acting as a sort of parent figure to Naruto && it's great :]
I mean they do have alot in common when it comes to how the villagers view them both :]
So was that Kakashi ;)
Anyways yeah I like your writing style && the way that you write the dialogue between Anko && Naruto :)
I hope you continue this...Can't wait to read more :P
| Aikori Shukrai chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
This is good. I look forward to reading more.
| Spirits.Dawn chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
omfg, get new chappy!like seriously, dont leave us hanging. We want more!
| Lazielow chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
I like it. This pairing is very good.
Please hurry up with next chapter.