Reviews for The Artist's Model
Grace chapter 7 . 3/14
How old √ądward)
Stuff chapter 15 . 12/28/2016
OMG! I was laughing throughout Twilight too!
wardlyman chapter 25 . 4/4/2016
Oh... realized this wasn't complete.. Bummer.

Still gonna review tho..

As of now, I'd give it a 6/10, but it would have been a 8/10, but you kinda ruined some of Bella's character in chapters 21-23.

I thought it was complete, it's not... Though I highly doubt it was going anywhere GOOD, the author did say it would get sweet before it got sour.

So bet assumption would be that James would have made a reappearance and remembered Bella and caused a major problem in their relationship, which more then likely would have been a misunderstanding. Causing Edward to once again close himself off

And since this is Twilight fandom, Edward would still in the end up apologizing and begging her to forgive him.
wardlyman chapter 23 . 4/4/2016
Only two chapters left... So the last few chapters with the off feeling was just that? Killing bella's character slightly for some drama for the story near the end?

Man I was really enjoying this fic until these last few. But there are still some serious things unresolved... and we are supposed to be getting those resolved in two chapters?
wardlyman chapter 22 . 4/4/2016
Uh? Ok... Bella the last few has been... off..
wardlyman chapter 21 . 4/4/2016
Honestly how is Edward not jealous or questioning her right now? I hope things don't get sweeter too soon, she needs to be brought back down to earth, but I 100% bet next chapter everything will be back to normal.
wardlyman chapter 14 . 4/4/2016
Wtf was with that with mike? She says save her and then you have him[edward] leave and get drinks? That makes no sense...

Neither does mikes lines... Is he her brother or something? lol
wardlyman chapter 13 . 4/4/2016
To cure lonely nights? Hope that doesn't mean what I think it does... I don't this bella for the type.

I was fairly enjoying things up until that line.
wardlyman chapter 4 . 4/4/2016
That last joke made me snort pretty loud... Snort as in laugh, not the other kind..

I usually don't laugh from the jokes Female writers put in, good job with that.
sweetgift chapter 25 . 12/28/2012
nice story...
plz update soon...
Louise S chapter 25 . 11/11/2012
Ive just spent 3 hours of my life on an unfinished fic? urrrggh. It was really good but the incompleteness of it has just ruined everything.
fireagate chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Interesting Edward
ElisseJay chapter 25 . 6/25/2012
such a shame you havnt finished this story :(

but still great work
prettynikki15 chapter 25 . 5/20/2012
Hey this story is so wonderful! If you could please finish...
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