Reviews for The Artist's Model
Sophie chapter 25 . 4/21/2009
Bonjour!ca va bien?

your story its truly incredible!I can't wait for the next chapter .I'm from québec and i'm speaking french(it is why my english is not that good!Lol)so if you nead help for french words i will be really happy to help you!

here my email

DearFictionalCharacter chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
are you going to update anytime soon! i really really miss your story.
IceDancex chapter 25 . 4/14/2009
omg! you need to update soon, this is awesome!
MaybeItsFoolish chapter 25 . 4/14/2009
W-O-W !

I just LOVE your story !

Everything is perfect. Will you finish it one day? I surely hope so!
Ariellove12 chapter 25 . 4/11/2009
i loves it so fantastic. esme is wonderful hah. i am a little confused tho. is the house like just for bella or will bella and edward live there? well anyhow fantastic writing, write more soon (:
xxxafc chapter 25 . 4/11/2009
i totally love this. I love edward and esme's relashonship. Great job! PLEASE update soon!
mikacullen16 chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
love it
Lilyblue chapter 25 . 4/7/2009
I love this story! Your chacterization is so amazing and so realistic. You Bella makes me laugh. Instead of the morose or no nonsense Bella, we get creative and energetic Bella.

Your characterization of Edward is also interesting. While his character in the canon would fit the morose artiste, you've breath new life into him. Making his character still in-character but definitely uniquely your own.

Lovely story! Also, I am delighted to see several of the characters something other than American. I don't think I've read a fic that's done that before. Finally this story makes me feel as if you have experience with the creative arts.

I definitely am looking forward to the next chapter!
cyhyraeth chapter 4 . 4/7/2009
french correction: "et pour toi, bella, LA même chose?" sinon c'est parfait!
Elena chapter 25 . 4/5/2009
Wait Wait Wait! ITS BEEN 2 MONTHS! where are you! i need to know what Bella thought of the house! Hello Author Lady where the heck are you?
sugarlicks chapter 23 . 4/5/2009
Oh how unbelieveable sweet! Goodness i love you! you are so AMAZING! geez geez... sorry... alittle carried away...

sugarlicks chapter 22 . 4/5/2009
OH YES SHE WILL! my goodness i love this story.. i love how innocent they are... great great great all of it! i just am said im almost out of chapters.. i dont want to stop this!

sugarlicks chapter 18 . 4/5/2009
Well. i love the whole him looking at her vails and lovingly kissing them.. sometimes i want by boyfriend to read these stories of how amazing Edward can be and what little he need to think about Bella to get off... get just maybe he could get some pointers... but i still love both of them

sugarlicks chapter 17 . 4/5/2009
Whoa Whoa Whoa... Bella is moving in with Edward? Thats GREAT! wow.. i love your story... its so great and intimate... this is so great!

53bookie chapter 25 . 4/4/2009

I'm not sure if you are still working on this story, but I do know that you take large gaps in between, so I will add it to my alerts anyway.

It would be nice to have a happy ending, though.

Also, I think Bella's worry over leaving something to be remembered in the world is very idealistic and I think it portrays the character of Bella perfectly.

Please continue.

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