Reviews for A Beautiful Lie
TeamRosemmett chapter 42 . 12/28/2024
Loved it. Hope you come back one day and write more stories. Would love to see more of Rosalie and Emmett in this universe
TeamRosemmett chapter 31 . 12/28/2024
Wish there was a chapter of Emmett proposing to Rose. Would have loved to have seen that
TeamRosemmett chapter 24 . 12/28/2024
How long has Emmett known Bella and Edward for because in some chapters it sounds like for years and then in the chapter where you mentioned about when Rosalie told Bella about Emmett, that sounds like he wasn't apart of their friend group at one point. But he has to have known them atleast maybe since they were kids if teenagers to have that bond with them both
VryUnique chapter 42 . 10/14/2023
Awesome story! Thanks so much for sharing.
What happened to Renee? Is she in Forks alone?
It was sad that Charlie died but not as sad as it
should have been because Bella's parents weren't
even a part of the story.
I was also expecting some James drama but it never
happened.
Still great.
VryUnique chapter 41 . 10/14/2023
All that is missing is Renee.
VryUnique chapter 39 . 10/14/2023
That's awful. I was waiting for a meet the parents.
VryUnique chapter 34 . 10/13/2023
There is no excuse for not telling Edward about his son. Bella's way wasn't the only way.
The whole story has said how Edward couldn't hive up his dream and come home but
nothing has been said about Bella coming to him. It sounded like he had gotten into
acting pretty quick and even if he didn't his parents probably could have helped. I
haven't heard any reason why Bella couldn't have joined him in LA.
DarkRomanceGirl97 chapter 8 . 9/3/2023
Is he deaf? She said that life is not for her, and he is choosing not to listen. Why would he want his child's life disrupted? That is not okay.
ClaceLover08 chapter 42 . 7/23/2023
I love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & I’m happy that Bella & Edward are Married & I’m happy that Bella & Edward have a Son and a Daughter
Emo4 chapter 42 . 11/11/2021
cute story.
Emo4 chapter 38 . 11/11/2021
In regards to the author note about Bella calling her son Timmy when she named him Edward Anthony. Did she call him Timmy to throw off suspicion that Edward was the father? And if that was the reason did her parents know he was named Edward Anthony? You would have thought she would have called him Tony or Ant. One other thing about this story is there has been what a sentence in regards to her dadparents) and that was after she called to say she was married and I'm assuming pregnant. I feel like that is something that should have had a place somewhere along the line since she told her parents her baby daddy was a random person. Like around the time of the People Magazine article or before. That feels like a big miss. I do like this story though.
Emo4 chapter 28 . 11/10/2021
I really hate that Alice always in every story I read even all human stories has to open her mouth and blab other peoples news. she is a very selfish, self-centered person. why can't she but out and let people share things in their own time? does this bug anyone else or is it just me?
Robsfan chapter 25 . 9/24/2021
Rob moments with Kristen he worried about her in airports even if she was right behind him
Robsfan chapter 19 . 9/23/2021
where is he filming?
Robsfan chapter 5 . 9/19/2021
she needs to tell him
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