Reviews for A Beautiful Lie
Ashmerlin chapter 42 . 4/19
Loved it! Such a sweet, sad, funny and loving story. So well written.

XoxoxoxoX
Alia
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 42 . 4/11
Ok... I started out totally enthralled but as I continued to read...it felt like Sex is a taboo for you. If that's the case then why post on a mature site? I am an adult with an appetite for smut. I've been married 40 years and have loved my husband since I was 10 years old so there isn't any phobia or aversions to fucking or making love. I read "M" mature stories at this mature site for a reason. It's we're I and so many others like me run away to for the "lemony goodness" to put it in a way you understand sex to be. I think overall I did enjoy the storyline but if one day you find the time and get past your aversion to smut I would love to re-read this story without the grammatical errors and with the smut because let's face it those of us who fuck! have oral sex and/or anal sex and who make love would love to re-read
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 16 . 4/9
So No Sex Talk? Well that sucks
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 15 . 4/9
Mmmmm!
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 14 . 4/9
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bobbysgirl1976 chapter 13 . 4/9
CHARGE IT!
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 12 . 4/9
James didn't seem to happy.
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 11 . 4/9
I noticed Bella didn't mention her confrontation with James.
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 9 . 4/9
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bobbysgirl1976 chapter 8 . 4/9
Wooo! Hoooooo!
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 7 . 4/9
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bobbysgirl1976 chapter 6 . 4/9
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bobbysgirl1976 chapter 5 . 4/9
Oh shit!
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 4 . 4/8
Every good story has an asshole...here it's James.
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 3 . 4/8
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