|Reviews for Jealous|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
Lol thats so funny i cant so immagine that!
| Newsie4eva chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
XD hilarious... Man now I'm curious about what Racetrack is gonna do! :)
| newsie dork from D.U.M.B.O chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
I was wondering when somebody would do something like this.
I love it, you nailed race's personality on the head. I can totally see him doing this.
I always wondered about race, and I love the way you portrayed him.
Race is a (somewhat) easy character to write for (everybody knows a Racetrack), but what I really like is hearing Race's thoughts.
newsie dork from D.U.M.B.O.
| AdrenalineRush16 chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Whoo! Aris is back! Hurray! I never thought of Davey being 2nd in command and I doubt Jack would do that, but you never know. I liked the thing with Spot listening to him. If I were Race, I'd be bugged too. I'll keep an eye out for Race's story! Keep it up!
P.S. Finally got an account! Whoo!
| NewsiesSpot88 chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
haha i liked it
| Wrider1004 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Lol, that was funny! “Nothin’ jus killin’ ya.” lol! You did a good job! Keep writing! (other stories:))
| pheonix-river chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
YAY THAT TOATLY ROCKED MY SOX IT WAS GREAT