|Reviews for Once Upon a Smile|
| Tawny chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
| Breeluv chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
awwwwww well thats is very adorable
| i want this account gone pleas chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
very short yet really good! (i wish you could hav added a few more chapters) plz write other Ahiru Fakir fanfics! :)
| AngelEmCuti chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
AHH KAWAII! _
| Ayatollah of Rock n' Rollah chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
I did go aw! It was amazing, reminds me of well... a natural convo. between the two characters.
| Kazuya RandomAuthor chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
Hehe.. A bit OOC but yeah, it made me kind of, "Aww..." XD
| AsianFlipGurl chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
AW...You have to admit that was cute.
*Uh-duh. She wrote the story.*
Shut up! Anyways, I just love it when Fakir smiles right? He's so angry and angsty all the time.
*That is why you shouldn't like him!*
Are you kidding me? He's so sexy...
*EW! YOU SAID SEXY!*
| RodentOfUnusualSize chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
Aw! That was adorable! I can't really imagine Fakir laughing, but that was totally cute.
| BluSakura chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Haha, that was really quite cute. The only thing that kind of bothers me is that Fakir is really out of character...does this take place during the anime? It may be possible if he lightened up after the anime ended...you should add a little background to justify Fakir's change in attitude. He seems unusually chipper...
Otherwise, it was a cute little read and it did make me smile. Keep up the good work!