Reviews for The Real Us |
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![]() ![]() So, if Grindelwald fell in with the Socialists, how did he end up advising Hitler? Hitler loathed socialists and socialism. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Autism IS NOT an ILLNESS it's a NEUROLOGICAL DISORDER. REMEMBER WHAT I SAID EARLIER ABOUT DOING YOUR RESEARCH? I KNOW IT'S "JUST A FANFICTION" but you are STILL giving out POTENTIALLY deadly FALSE information so I have no choice but to report this poorly written fiasco of a story. FYI: before you DARE to try to clap back at me for calling you out on your APPALLING "writing" let me tell you one thing. I DECLARE ON MY PROFILE AND IN EVERY STORY I WRITE THAT I AM DEFECTIVE. I see no evidence of the same from you so my intention to report this mess stands. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Professor Snape is a half-blood, ergo he would know what a terrorist is. he's from Cokeworth which isn't that far from Manchester. Manchester was bombed by the IRA more than once from 1960 until 1998 as was London. If you're going to include that kind of Information in a story PLEASE DO YOUR RESEARCH PROPERLY!. |
![]() ![]() I love this story ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was soo good i loved every chapter. I especially loved Snape in this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i already know imma love this one l. not giving a flip mcgonagall give me life. wonder if i can get some of that popcorn |
![]() ![]() Normally, Evil Dumbledore is my thing. But despite that, I still liked this story. The plentiful Weasley putdowns helped - especially since you haven't tried to cast Fred and George in a good light like so many others did. They... really weren't nice people in the books. But honestly? The thing that stood out most to me is Umbridge. Not because of the complete personality flip, but her physical description. A teacher, shorter than the students and who's rather attractive. Reminded me of one of my teachers in school. She didn't have black hair, instead it was dark brown. And she was more slender than athletic. But she was shorter than a lot of the students and she was very, /very/ beautiful. I imagine that my heart wasn't the only one to be broken when Miss Reynolds became a Mrs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the story, but this one is not for me. I look forward to your next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good, thanks. I loved Umbridge here. It was very refreshing to see her as a goodie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've never seen an "E" for a grade before. |
![]() ![]() Lily Evans was actually born Lily McGregory she was switched with a muggle baby to save her life when she was 2 years old. Lily McGregory was a Pureblood witch. |
![]() ![]() Public phones are for poor people. Almost everyone has a cellphone. |
![]() ![]() Actually you can pass with a C- some schools a D or a D But only if you get 1 two D's is the same as an F and F or 2 D's you Flunk. |
![]() ![]() Should have boosted hermiones powers and let her get harry free. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was actually thinking "Blues Brothers", instead of "Men in Black". |