Reviews for The Real Us
erstwhile-S chapter 9 . 1/6/2022
These are some neat explanations for the events of the books. Nicely done. I wasn’t comfortable with the underage sex, but enjoyed everything else. Thanks.
liljoker2687 chapter 1 . 10/11/2021
This is f**kin’ excellent! This is probably one of the very best fics that I’ve read on here, great story!
CarolsSister chapter 9 . 10/8/2021
This has to be the most comprehensive explanation for all of the things that occurred in canon, while correcting the bits which should not have happened (like Ronniekins and Hermione getting together, Harry and Ginny, Molly looked upon as being some wonderful earth mother, etc etc etc). Thank you.
CarolsSister chapter 4 . 10/7/2021
As and here I was hoping that "fluffing my garfield" meant something quite different. After all, if Garfield is a pussy cat, I went straight for the pussy part and added in Harry and came up with something a bit off color. My bad.
Madhave chapter 2 . 9/30/2021
The first chap was great but now... the scene where it says "i will like to do something to make you feel good" Oh goddd. This is where i abandon this story which could have a lotta potential. You.. You've made it disgusting now... 11 and 12 really? and even if it happened WHY THE FUCK do the people need to know? For all i know you could have them doing it infront of every one later!
This had potential but.. YUCK
The Unnamed One chapter 5 . 9/8/2021
I caught the Voyager reference.
Freddie Rindklip chapter 9 . 9/8/2021
In the end it worked out. It was frustrating that the Death Eaters had constant chances to commit chaos. The "good guys" were put down hard meanwhile. Even the veterans of the first war allowed this. Despite that the fic was still very readable.
gginsc chapter 2 . 9/6/2021
You just grossed me out! 11 and 12 year olds having sex! How could you? As much as I would like to see a different take on Harry' life, I can't abide this. Why would you even write such a thing? It is unnecessary to the story.
Ada chapter 2 . 8/11/2021
I have to disagree with Dumbledore on one thing. Petunia is NOT Harry's only living relative. Mabye his most direct but Harry is related to several widarding families via his paternal grandmother, Euphemia Potter nee Black (placeholder name Dorea). The Blacks are married to several notable families, Including the people Dumbledore COULD have considered leaving Harry with, the Prewetts (Molly Weasley's maiden family), the Longbottoms as well as the Mcmillan (as in Ernie McMillan) and of course the Tonks via Nymphadora Tonks's mother Andromeda

On the Slytherin side where Dumbledore would never have considered there's the Flints, Bulstrodes, Burkes, Yaxleys, Crabbes, Crouchs, Rosiers, and of course the LeStranges, and the Malfoys

So lets be honest, the only reason Harry was left with the Dursleys was because of so called blood wards which probablly didn't work because there was no love to fuel the sacrificial source of said blood wards making Harry's preasnece at the Dursleys entirely pointless.

Sorry, it's just been bothering me when people try to write off Harry's lack of a family as cannon when the Black family tree, penned by Rowling herself for the 5th movie and where you can find just by searching it on google images, shows very clearly that Harry DOES indeed have several living family members. Some of which are actually his fellow students
Ada chapter 9 . 8/11/2021
I started reading some of the precious reviews for this story. Bet the haters have never even heard of the 2worst written HP fic ever, "My Immortal" and "Hogwarts school of Prayer and Miracles" (and yes there IS actually a fic up there with My Immortal). After you read those 2 fics you really know what terrihle writing is. This fic is not terrible writing. The child porn was a but much but i found myself enjoying the rest of the fic
GreenOtter467 chapter 9 . 8/10/2021
Holy Zeus that was an amazing read, the humour made me laugh, the story had me gripped, and utterly amazing read!
Amanda Chapman chapter 9 . 7/2/2021
Dear Odin... I loved this story! I loved the nicknames. the humor. everything! I love your style of writing! definatly going to look for more from you!
Jonathan Deller chapter 9 . 6/28/2021
This is an incredible tale.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/27/2021
Damn, some people really do enjoy nitpicking, huh?

Well, doesn’t matter. Reread this for the fifth time, still just as good as I remember!
Soraslove chapter 1 . 6/8/2021
I wish this was canon, lol.
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