Reviews for Halloween Shake Down
GuessWho25 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
That was cute, and I can so see that happening :)
nahadiba chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
my poor strawbery...kiki...isshin r bad boy..but still..it give lots of push to my sweety strawberry
Chiremae chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
LOL! Good job!
DelMarch chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
That was nice, but...

"He walked a bit awkward all the way home and wouldn’t udder a word to her."

The word you meant to use is "utter". "Udder" is... something else ;) (To be more precise, it's what Mila Rose calls Rangiku in the last manga chapter :P )

Other than that, good job :) !
Fathom-x chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
That was cute. I liked Rukia as a mischievous vixen.

"udder" should be "utter" otherwise you're talking about cow teats

There was another wrong word too, but I can't remember what it was.

Overall, it was a good effort. It was good that it was simple and short. So many other ones were long and drawn out, yet random. You really simplified the plot point and the humor well.

Good Luck on your contest.

~FAthom
PadfootsAngel1 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
okay sorry found this through your bleach asylum link currently lurking in thread. just got done reading this. so cute :P isshin's a very very bad boy :P LOL. and poor poor innocent strawberry...I mean ichigo. and pen name is angels_gal over at bleach asylum.