Reviews for Showered with Surprises
Wind chimer chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Nice one shot
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
This is a good story and it could actually fit in with the events in the anime. I bet Mello wasn't expecting that. Seeing as how he's usually in charge, it's funny to see Halle being the one to make the advances. In the end Mello got more than he bargained for. Good work with this story.
LuminiaAravis chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Hello. This is your friendly neighborhood crack dealer.

Wow. That wasn't exactly "funny," per se, but the situation itself was humorous. "Kidnapping and blackmail." Lawl!
Firrelle chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
haha... great story!

i love it
fluffymareep chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
I had to keep my composure when I read this, or I might wake up my family with erupting fits of laughter!
Zophoria chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
umm...thisis actually the first story i read that was HalXMel.

way to go, 'cuz i'm just short of speechless
Akabane Girl chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Ok, a review in three seconds : I like your sto... Sorry, three seconds only ! Hem, excuse me, I have a weird humor.

Ah, MelloxHalle... Ah, your story... Ah, Mello ! That was so hilarious ! XD Good job~
great gospel chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Haha that was hilarious. Poor Mello was so unnerved. xD
bubblegum-buddy chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
That. Was epic.

Oh, Mello. We all know he just wanted to get some in the end. (Doesn't any man?)

I thought Halle was really in character. :3 Good work!
Dlvvanzor chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Woah! Wah! Okay. Reading straight stuff again, after reading so much of your MxM. Throwing me off. O.O This is that "hetero" stuff, right? With the girl and the guy? Weird. :p

Nice fic, especially with such an unusual pairing. :)
The Golden Lily chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
coolcool .interesting
Lamia of the Dark chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
lol. So that's what happened. :D

I love fics that fit neatly into the canon like that~
BuffoonPrincess chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
I think it was a bit too much for Hal to say those things... If you wanted her to be desperate I think you should have made her beg or something like that.

I'm not sayin' that I didn't like it. I'm just sayin' that I think you didn't achieve the effect you wanted.

But all in all it was a good fic.


shuddup123 chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
O they got jiggy with it, didn't they? Lulz i'm more of a MelloxMatt person [[the couple really isn't crack]] but this is one of my few favorite Heterosexual couples xD
Reverberating Winds chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Haha, that was really cute. I love Mello x Hal. His reaction was great!