It was pure joy to get to know your Cáer and Aengus, loved the alternative universe they belong to. The only thing that could have made the story better would have been more Alice 3 :D

The ending made me kinda mad. Bella was literally an inconsequential character. She died to help Aengus and he’s like “That’s tragic. I’ve got my wife though. Burn the body.” I love the whole story and I love Caer, and even though we’re saying Caer is Bella she really isn’t. Bella has no voice at the end of the story. Well written, just a very sad ending to me

Such a great story! Thank you for sharing your characters!

I really enjoyed this story! It’s brilliant!

Bravo! I enjoyed this unique tale.

Yeah! So most of the men are left in the dark, as usual.

So the shells of B & E lay together.

Damn. Iron is the love god's kryptonite.

I'm surprised he hadn't asked the ladies to stay with Bella at all times.

Well damn.

Damn. They're not safe anywhere.

And her family's coming to visit. Eek!

Ah ha! Another good Irish name.

And he thought she'd be lonely in Ireland.

Excellent plan!