|Reviews for Effects and Side Effects|
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/4
Pretty good, although there is a couple of grammar mistakes. For example, "use using was"
| RyanMK666 chapter 10 . 5/26
i won't lie i do not understand in the slightest why he has to dress like a girl' ever heard of a tom boy before? he doesn't have to at all this just to me doesn't seem right and it's bothering me that you seem to be forcing it way to much
| pfeil chapter 37 . 4/14
Any chance you'll come back to this some day? I just re-read the whole thing and loved it as much as I remembered. You're so close to the finale too...
| DarkHunter25 chapter 37 . 3/21
Can't wait for the next chapter, I've sucked into this story since chapter 1. Excited to see how you handle the weddings and the next mission.
| Guest chapter 37 . 3/8
Keep the story going it's awesome
| Rossaldinho7 chapter 37 . 2/16
I keep on coming back to this story, hoping there are more chapters, and being disappointed. Still a fantastic story, and hope to see more soon.
| RobinTheSlytherin chapter 1 . 2/14
haha! just started and I'm in love! Luna woyld say some shit like that!
| amyrlinengineer chapter 1 . 2/2
I just want to throw in that I love this story. I've read it twice already, and probably will again. I'm sad there hasn't been an update in a long time, but thank you for the gem we've been able to enjoy so far.
| murgel chapter 37 . 2/1
great story. I really love the unique approach you took.
I'm quite sad to see you stuck at this point and hope the bug gets you soon to complete this one.
| Jake chapter 37 . 1/10
Ser, a you alive?
| Glumski chapter 37 . 1/7
Well, this story is certainly interesting; it's the only Fem!Harry/Multi story that I've seen so far. Your eye for detail is incredible, with hundreds of pages for only a single summer without it becoming boring or repetitive.
I definitely think that you need a beta though. There were quite a bit of mistakes - both typos and grammatical ones - that always manage to sneak through. I think that the name of Hermione's mother changed from Emily to Emma halfway through the story, and there were a few systematically misspelled names/words like Pensieve or Alastor. All of it is stuff that can easily be fixed by a beta but is difficult to notice by yourself.
The overall story I really liked. It's a unique spin on the whole Fem!Harry thing and while the harem pairings always seem somewhat suspect to me, it does really work here. I hope you'll continue writing eventually; I'd very much like to see an update to this story!
| Madmess chapter 37 . 12/31/2017
Its a great story, Im just really hoping you come back and either finish it or at least let everyone know you are discontinuing. Awesome story though!
| DarthEpsilon chapter 36 . 12/30/2017
This story hasn't been updated in 2 years please update soon or make authors note telling us if it has been abandoned
| seldombites chapter 37 . 12/30/2017
I don't normally like female Harry stories. I am, however, enjoying this one. Do you think you will be continuing with it?
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/11/2017
I'm glad no girl will suffer after pencil dick malfoy is gone poor tom he lost his favorite and new gf I would say wife but tom won't be around