Reviews for Effects and Side Effects
StoryTagger chapter 3 . 2/1/2009
That was really a great chapter. And long, boy was it long! I would think that the Basilisk's own venom would decay the beast, but it is pretty cool what been written for this chapter. I also got a laugh out of Harry having to hear the 'necessities of life' talk that girls get...
javacap chapter 3 . 2/1/2009
I really like this story. I hope that you aren't planning to leave harry as a female for too long.
dougal74 chapter 3 . 2/1/2009
Another well written chapter. I look forward to the next one.
Orlandus chapter 3 . 2/1/2009
Wow, nice chapter although i wish that there was more scenes rather than only one main one about the chamber, i think you should compress the smaller things... unless you are building the charcters up?

i always wanted to see a multi fic where there was hermione and ginny together cooperating and bieng good friends like they always are... and also luna is my favourite character, the 2 girls per house thing i gues is just to even it out a bit.

but yea i think you should start speeding up events because not much has happened since the beginning only character development and smaller parts describing what the girls are planning.

i like the part where harry WAS embarresed but is becoming desensatised to the whole girl thing, and having 8 (?) wives.

Keep it up, I always enjoy reading Harry/Multi.
dougal74 chapter 2 . 12/28/2008
A great second chapter...I look forward to chapter 3.
dougal74 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Interesting start...love to see how this story develops.
FireNin17 chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
this is a great story definately keep it up i will be looking foward to the next chapter
Meany chapter 2 . 11/23/2008
That's so col! Update soon!
rookie802 chapter 2 . 11/23/2008
Awesome story. I can only hope that Harry will get turned back sometime soon!

Cannot wait foyour next postingto e up.
StoryTagger chapter 2 . 11/23/2008
This story is awesome so far! And it was pretty cool (and rather stupid of him) of Voldemort to think that his soul was augmenting Harry's magic when it was in fact the reverse. Very cool irony. Keep it up and this will continue to be a great story! Bye.
Parry Otter 351 chapter 2 . 11/23/2008
Ahh, poor Harry! Bound by oath to all those witches, now a witch as well, and still waiting to discover what other side-effects from the potion will occur. Not to mention the fact that will at some point have to deal with the monthly situation familiar to all females ;-D Oh well, it seems Harry won't lack for instructors (LOL). It will be veery interesting to see just where you will take this story. A touch of angst, a good shot of humor, combined in a different way. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to reading more. Ta-ta for now.
Cocoa Girl2 chapter 2 . 11/22/2008
Will Harry ever turn back into a boy? I do think it will be fun for Harry to be a girl for a while though. Will Harry get anything extra from Gringotts because he is a girl? And will there be a problem getting the title of Lord Potter at 16 because he is currently a girl? Did Lily have any magical ancestors that she didn't know about that Harry will find out when he goes to Gringotts and does a blood test.
Orlandus chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
I think this story looks good, but to get more people reading and reviewing it you need to write more chapters.

Keep it up.
kitsune potter chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
it's a good start and i see alot of potential for a well plotted out storry that will grap many peoples attention. my question is what becomes of Harry? the main side effect is eassy to see, Harry is a girl, through Tracy's comment, belive rather beautiful. what else though, there is more effects than a large power boost and gender change. then you throw in interhouse girls trying to figure out about all of Harry's adventures along with giving the houses some humanity, slythrin enspecaily, which i find lacking in a lot of fanfictions lately. you have a promising story that i have to watch beacuse it is entertaining to read, i hope that you are gooing to update real soon.
Rebekah chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
A very impressive and intelligent start for a first time novelist - obviously the author has a natural talent and passion. The story has a original story-line that is well thought out with careful planning, surprise twists, humor and isn't at all predictable - which means the chapters to follow will only keep readers entranced and wanting to know more.

The writer portrays careful consideration for the reader and there is a definite plan in place for this story which will no doubt be needing a sequel or two.

This story is definitely going to a very exciting, well worded and articulate piece of fiction well worth reading more than once.
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