it's a good start and i see alot of potential for a well plotted out storry that will grap many peoples attention. my question is what becomes of Harry? the main side effect is eassy to see, Harry is a girl, through Tracy's comment, belive rather beautiful. what else though, there is more effects than a large power boost and gender change. then you throw in interhouse girls trying to figure out about all of Harry's adventures along with giving the houses some humanity, slythrin enspecaily, which i find lacking in a lot of fanfictions lately. you have a promising story that i have to watch beacuse it is entertaining to read, i hope that you are gooing to update real soon.

A very impressive and intelligent start for a first time novelist - obviously the author has a natural talent and passion. The story has a original story-line that is well thought out with careful planning, surprise twists, humor and isn't at all predictable - which means the chapters to follow will only keep readers entranced and wanting to know more.

The writer portrays careful consideration for the reader and there is a definite plan in place for this story which will no doubt be needing a sequel or two.

This story is definitely going to a very exciting, well worded and articulate piece of fiction well worth reading more than once.

Great story. I absolutely love it. I cannot wait to find out what happens next. Update soon please.

Good story, keep up the good writing! :)

Luna brings up a very good point. I like where you're taking this. I'd have liked to see a bit more of an explanation on Daphne's and Tracey's actions, but since this is the first chapter, that's ok. Keep up the good work!