Reviews for Effects and Side Effects |
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wiebenor chapter 37 . 9/1/2023 Good story, but I'd love to see it continued at some point... Will be following and favoriting this story. Keep up the good work! |
wiebenor chapter 16 . 8/30/2023 Not completely sure I agree with the ending of chapter 16, when considering that most fanfiction stories, or more likely all stories besides this one, have nothing in the way of armor, in this case, basilisk hide, that can protect them while in animagus form, considering that the animagus form turns everything on your person, for example, clothes and wand, as well as any other loosely attached or worn items, into the animagus form's skin/fur. I'm not going to go as far as to say that it's 100% certain that it won't work, but will say that for it to work, there should be an explanation of exactly WHY it'll work DIFFERENTLY than practically EVERYTHING ELSE in the wizarding world, in relation to the animagus transformation. And no, before anyone asks, just saying "it's a basilisk skin, therefore it'll obviously behave this way, if we charm it for automatic sizing" without any information as to why, apparently, they would be the only ones able to do that with their forms, judging by how already known animagi use there forms, and/or become their forms, won't work... All that criticism of the last paragraph or two aside, I'm really liking this story and I hope for two things... first, I hope that the whole animagus armor question gets explained in the story. Second, but not least, I hope that this is a finished story (since I didn't check before starting, and hardly ever do), or that the author will finish this in the future z as it's actually a VERY good story. Of course, since it's rated "M" I hope we get to see lots of lemons, limes, and pornstar rated content by the time I reach the end(while staying within the fanfiction website rules of course (since EVERYONE does... right?)) (and don't get me started on how ridiculous that rule is for many reasons) Am following and favoriting this story. Keep up the good work! |
tristan.tremblay13 chapter 37 . 8/27/2023 I wish he didn't end it here |
AnimeGuy93 chapter 10 . 7/23/2023 I'm officially bored with this Harry interesting fic tho |
AnimeGuy93 chapter 9 . 7/23/2023 I'm disappointed that there's been more relationship development between Hermione and Ginny than Harry and his supposedly wives |
Arturia LeFay chapter 1 . 4/7/2023 oh... Luna never change! |
BlindFaunusGirl chapter 37 . 3/19/2023 Good story so far. I hope you return to it someday. |
Arumia chapter 21 . 3/18/2023 Please change the fem-Harry tag, it’s not a lesbian female Harry it’s a genderfluid Harry that’s can be either male or female on command, using fem-Harry tells us it’s an all female harem which it’s not, you should also address more lgbtq stuff, like girls liking girls and gender identity |
arumia chapter 8 . 3/18/2023 Even if Harry is a guy and isn’t trans just in the wrong body, this should be labels and femslash when they end goal is male Harry and harem |
Arumia chapter 8 . 3/18/2023 I’m finding myself hating the fact no one knows what being gay is, I also find myself despising people being forced to be attracted to a gender they arnt attracted to, if you don’t like girl who would like a trans girl, even if you dated them before their transition, either these girls a bi and just have no care for gender or the bond is forcing it (which is no better then mind control) |
Arumia chapter 5 . 3/18/2023 Doesn’t anyone, even the muggles know what transgender or gay or any lgbtq thing is? |
La Phyzz chapter 37 . 3/16/2023 I love this story and it has been one of my favorites for years just a sham the story and the account have been abandoned. I hope te author is alive and well and may soon return to this story as it was an interesting tale with a mix of plots i have seen before in a very diffent way |
Just William chapter 21 . 1/3/2023 Another Typo, "hurt his closet friends", should be "hurt his closest friends". |
Just William chapter 20 . 12/31/2022 A couple of typo's, "as the hurried back", should be "as they hurried back", AND "rocked back on his heals", should be "rocked back on his heels". |
Just William chapter 19 . 12/31/2022 A typo, "bodies the Daniel", should be "bodies that Daniel". |