|Reviews for The Dream Story|
| i like pie chapter 1 . 6/25/2017
why put a space in Magecraft? everyone does it and it's slightly annoying. but i like it, its good!
| MethLabrador chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
This is so cute! _
| Olmo chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Nicely done. (y)
Torak's statement about Seshru's cowardice and Renn's bravery is correct. And Saeunn is quite a brick, even if she's often correct.
One thing though: you forgot that it's forbidden to say the deceased one's name for the next five summers so that their ghost won't haunt you.
| Miragesofyou chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Really, write a 2nd chap...
| thebrunetteone chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
This is great. Particularly enjoyed Fin-Kedinn and Saeunn's parts.
| Electric Reader chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
one of my favourite stories!
| AllyJackson chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
This is really good! A few grammatical errors, but other than that, this story is awesome!
| Eleutheria Wolf chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
This is cute...;)
| FanFantasyWriter chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Wait, how did Renn not notice if Saeunn left the shelter too?
| RileyleFae chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
crap? This? Are you sure we're talking about the same story? This was awesome!
| lonewolfcub chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
This was actually good! You should do a second chapter!
| dracon867 chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
WHEN'S THE NEXT ONE COMING
it's really good
| the-dark-princess-of-awsome chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
OH! So cute!
Renn and Torak make a perfect couple, I wish they would just notice that themselves!
| ZombieRider chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
i didnt think it was crap :D i shouldnt have read it though, because i havent read all the books yet and i didnt know the viper mage was Renn's mom. thats okay though, your story was good enough to make up for it
| craizypet chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
no, it is not crap, it is exactaly what i am looking for in the next book of the series, i wish that the next book will have some torak and renn romance, or more than friend stuff in it.
you should keep writing, it is good stuff, and the style is similar to what michele pavers style is.