Reviews for Winter Dreams
Hey chapter 1 . 7/11
So, your English is absolutely fine! Just to help in the future, "mentioned" is supposed to be "motioned" (on how you used it in this story.)
But great job! I loved the sad ending- makes it a bit more cannon.
Honey-Kay chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Aww this story was so cute / I found Draco and Cedric equally adorable 3 Though the ending was a bit sad, I still loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
you should let me get that metal frame yo :D
Valex Charme chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Simply cute! Draco was too adorable in this!
Valex Charme chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Simply cute! Draco was too adorable in this!
Gerocz Denise chapter 1 . 7/15/2010

First of all, I'd like to mention how pleasantly you've surprised me with your english.

I've been to Germany a year ago, spent couple of weeks there, but my limited German knowledge wasn't enough and the people around us were so stubborn, that if they did understand what I was trying to mimic, no one helped me. This way I ended up at a railway passage in the middle of the night asking for "caffe-cupen", a coffee mug. The phrase was something similar to this: "Guten abend. Do dich haben eine caffe-cupen mit Deutschland logo?" Yes, they laughed, and yes they said Nien.

The reason why I wanted to tell you this funny story of mine is, that even if I knew, that I would be the source of their jokes for God knows how long, it didn't frightened me, that my -sorry for the expression- crappy german won't be enough to communicate my desire, my will.

I hope, that you will continue to wright without fear. Don't let anyone put you down for some spelling mistakes. A person does not know even their mother-language 100%!

Take care of yourself.

Denise :)
Highqueen Julietta chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
WOW! I shouldnt have read that... *grins* I am to innocent.

though, your writing is so amazing! I am speechless. Didnt expect that ending... sad.

Replicae chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
CedricDraco ist eindeutig genial xD

Meine Kritik ist dann so ähnlich, wie die der Andern...

Das Ende is so traurig xDD

Nunja, immerhin hatten die Beiden ihren spaß... x3

Ah und du hast echt gut Englisch geschrieben

Ich hab mich auch dran versucht, aber leider

werd ich dann immer so ein bischen...

na wie sagt man das... ich beschreibe zu wenig.

Das hast du anscheinend im Griff, find ich super -

Greez Suna
karaloveless chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Oh my goodness.

Such an amazing story.

I am really sad its a oneshot. I would love to read more, it is such a unique pairing and I love it.


You amase me.
xxx chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
loved it.
Pockyfest chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
ZOMG! That is SO sad! What the heck? Why did you end there? Hmf! It would of been so nice, if Cedric broke up with Cho cause he loves Draco and makes a move to confess! I hate it ending like that! Jokes! It was very good, that's why I'm so frustrated. You ruined a perfectly good ending!* Nah! forget it! I'm sure Draco can't forget Cedric and Cedric is sad, and they come back together in the end anyway.
dannas-girl chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
wow! i mean one of the best one shots so far from my point of you! i would even say some of it was cute! i think iam geting even more of yaoi fangirl than i allready am!
Wing of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/9/2008 better continue this. please update!:D
RecklessWonder chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Aww, this was really good. But sad that you left them both unhappy.

Can't wait to read more if you do anymore!

abandonyourdefenses chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
Wow. this wasn't bad considering this is your first time writing in English. Well done. It's a very nice story... seriously, who would have ever thought of Cedric/Draco? It's usually Harry/Draco or Harry/Cedric (-sigh- again it's all about Harry... but whatevs.) This was very well done, not many grammar issues. You can certainly work on it, but there were very few mistakes that I saw in the story. I loved it. -clap clap claparoo!-


-Kailey (aka DiggoryDigsAllTheBoys)