Reviews for Antivillain
K. Teto chapter 1 . 10/17/2016
This is so far the only fanfic that made me chuckle so much. Your humor just.. clicked with mine. I certainly admire your sentences, your use of words, your vocab.. Hey, this may sounds like a hopeless wish, but I would undoubtedly love it if you continue the story.
Black Zora chapter 7 . 5/20/2016
A very good read! Sometimes Halle seemed a little too tame and Matt a tad too subservient to me, but I thoroughly enjoyed your Mello and the story as a whole. I love reading about Mello as well as the minor characters, and Halle appears to be underrated as well as underrepresented in the fandom, so I was happy to find your gripping tale about the two, or, Matt included, three of them.

Pity you never completed the story. I actually think that with just a little epilogue, it could become well-rounded. We all know the eventual sad ending anyway, after all - unless you planned on twisting it into something happier, that is ... - which I would *love* too read!
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 7 . 7/1/2015
Another amazing story from you. What can I say, I just love your writing style so much. Outstanding work!
pitkat chapter 7 . 3/3/2015
Fantastic fic! It's too bad it was never finished. I love the interaction between Halle and Mello, and even Matt. He's a bit too puppyish, yet in think you got the right balance in the extremes of their characters. Keep at it! Happy writing!
Just. Wow chapter 7 . 2/27/2015
This was the best fanfiction about Mello (and Halle) so far. I mean, I haven't read a lot of fanfiction in English, but this just blew me away. I mean, Matt and Mello are my Death Note OTP, but Halle and Mello together are just too hot to handle. Especially your writing impressed me. The way you describe the characters is amazing. Text was easy and nice to read, even though it could've been longer. The sexual tension between Halle and Mello was something I was expecting, but whoah.

Your Matt was pretty close to my headcanon of him. He was sweet and made nice contrast when compared to Mello. I was happy to see that good old change in Mello after the explosion-incident. I hope you still check your comments and I promise to read more fanfiction from you. Oh by the way, this is my first comment ever in and also one of my few reviews in English, but I hope you got the point. Thank you so much!

- Ronja aka Uncaring
Guest chapter 7 . 2/4/2015
That was the single most well-characterised and eloquently, interestingly written fanfiction I have ever been granted the pleasure of reading. Mello, Matt and especially Near are practically impossible to write convincingly while sustaining their allure and this story, I feel, defines them perfectly. In fact, it is the only fic I've ever read that nails not only one of them, but all three, dead on. Oh, and I'd not really read much with Halle before, but you have really piqued my interest in her, so thank you.
Lily chapter 7 . 3/16/2014
omg i need to read more of this..

please update! something, anything about these two
LadyS chapter 7 . 3/14/2014
Please update this story!
Melloxhalle interactions are amazing, please, please, continue!
spirit821 chapter 7 . 7/31/2013
ssunsea chapter 7 . 7/21/2012
Brilliant, loving it! It's difficult to write a story with this pairing because there isn't much you can expand from. Even though, I think you're doing a really good job! Really looking forward to this. :)
justalildifferent101 chapter 7 . 4/15/2012
I wanted to let you know that I've been reading this story for 2 hours straight and the tension is amazing and passionate and your chapter titles are friggin awesome and you must continue for the sake of me. Thank you, that will be all.

*bows before queen Bialy*
Evie Antorcha chapter 7 . 9/30/2011
I really hope you will continue this...
hyaloid fiction chapter 7 . 9/29/2011
AH, I love this fic, have been following it forever, and am very glad I can how join FF to add it to my favorites. It's really excellent, please keep working on it at some point! 3
jenuinetears chapter 7 . 4/8/2011
This is the fic that got me addicted to Mello/Halle- I never even thought about it much before reading this. You illustrate their relationship so well that I can't not like it. And a bit of smut added to a greatly written fanfic always makes me happy.
Mara chapter 7 . 10/24/2010
That was absolutely amazing!1!

It was absolutely incredible and I really really really REALLY want you to finish this. Please? Pretty please with sugar on top?
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