|Reviews for Moving On|
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/17/2012
carry on writing love it xx
| Bob chapter 6 . 8/14/2012
| rosalie123 chapter 5 . 3/9/2009
| kdscutie chapter 5 . 3/7/2009
im sure you were already told this, but how come it has the last chapter, with more of it added?
well, anyways, i enjoyed the new part!
but since his name is "laurent", i dont think bella should trust him, unless its ooc.
cant wait for another update! xD
| UpYourCupcake chapter 5 . 3/4/2009
Interesting, I am hooked so far )
| A is for Angel chapter 5 . 3/3/2009
truly awesomely amazing:)
| weflytothetardis chapter 5 . 3/2/2009
| jaylyn793 chapter 5 . 3/2/2009
OH MY GOD! U FINALLY UPDATED! I THOUGHT THIS CHAPTER WOULD NEVER COME! i thought this story had vampires in it i didnt know that it was all human. i kinda forgot wat happened in this story though. good chapteri hope u write more!
| jaylyn793 chapter 4 . 12/26/2008
i was really happy that u updated today and i hope u will update soon like tomorow cuz ur story is awesome! keep writing!
| A is for Angel chapter 4 . 12/26/2008
| Manda.luver.of.twilight chapter 4 . 12/26/2008
Ha, love the new chapter, great job. Merry Christmas!
| Manda.luver.of.twilight chapter 3 . 12/24/2008
love it. the dialouge was alittle straight forward, like when bella says "Wow, you drive really fast" maybe next time you could say. something like holy jeeze. thats a little fast there, or make some comment about it or give clues to the speedeness of the driver, so its more entertaining to read. well i really did love it. cant wait for the next chapter.
| Deathy Baby chapter 3 . 12/23/2008
yea, this is kind of a sad chapter, but I feel so bouncy! update soon and check out my new story! ps it's called saved
| jaylyn793 chapter 3 . 12/22/2008
i think ur story is going awesome and i love how u set things up between all the cullens and jacob and bellas father. i hope u will update soon cuz i really like ur story and i will be hounding the computer waiting unril u update again! oh and i gave a question: r the cullens vampires or is this all human? i hope i will get to figure out soon! keep writing like DUH! EVERY DAY, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! seriously love ur story! that was like the longest review ive ever done and only for ur story cuz its so AWESOME!
| A is for Angel chapter 3 . 12/22/2008
no its ok i understand why you didnt update