Reviews for Davis's Pain
Ultimateblack chapter 19 . 6/4/2014
Where is the next chapter we have all been waiting for?
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 19 . 11/7/2013
Very nicely done buddy:) PLEASE COME BACK TO UPDATE SOON!
me not u chapter 19 . 10/1/2013
i know... wait i think you need to finish the story i want ti know what happens!
matt.bannon.31 chapter 19 . 10/25/2012
Ok. I have one thing to say about this. ... I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE! That's all, thanks!
matt.bannon.31 chapter 3 . 10/25/2012
Okay, I've been reading your stories starting with Davis's Tears and I really like the story. Also, FUCK YEAH, GREEN DAY! Huge Green Day fan! Anyway, Imma go back to reading your awesome story now! :)
janzen222 chapter 19 . 9/24/2012
when you gonna update?
Taeniaea chapter 19 . 12/26/2011
cool story
Guest chapter 19 . 5/31/2011
that was worth the wait. i feel like i had a late birthday this year and happy to say i injoyed myself. i like how u gave kari some "balls". Really stresses the mental toll on the team
Digifreak92 chapter 19 . 5/29/2011
Took long enough! lol jk but ive been waiting for this to show back up! lol glad u finally made an appearance! :) confusing but good chapter ill have to go through and re read to remember what all is happening :P
shark bandanaz chapter 18 . 5/8/2011
please finish the story. i made an account just to tell u to finish this story.
goldwargreymon chapter 18 . 5/2/2011
Are you going to finish this story? I was really getting into it.
Broken Juggernaut chapter 12 . 4/25/2011
Wow... Look im sorry for what i wrote/and if feelings were

hurt(probable not but still;had a headache so yeah) but I just find

it really hard to believe some of their attitudes,the way their

acting and the direction the story in general was taking, kinda of

irrelevant though since you've already finished the story (although

it doesn't say complete Im assuming your finish since you haven't

updated in awhile; which by the way, is why i was so surprised to

see that you've replayed to my comment). Also this one (Davis's Pain)

seems to be a bit more scattered then your previous one (Davis's tears)

, it seems so random compared to your other story; like the ideas are

all jogged up, you know? Anyway, I just wrote this to hopefully explain

myself (headache me irritable), and to say sorry. I usually don't dis

stories like that without explaining why I feel it is so; and to be honest

reading your reply made me wince a bit. So... ya?
Broken Juggernaut chapter 13 . 4/24/2011
I give up on this story... "sigh"

So Freaking retarted
DigiFreak92 chapter 18 . 12/31/2010
dude please! you gotta finish! i've been waiting for months now! its eating at me lol please finish it!
coop97 chapter 18 . 10/12/2010
Please update soon, people are going to start to think you died
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