|Reviews for The Will Of D|
| ljburris333 chapter 31 . 2/25
Please keep writing. This is my first fanfic, and I really want to be able to finish it. If you are having trouble coming up with new material, I suggest rereading the story up until this point so you might remember what you had planed for it. Then write it down! If that still doesn't help, then also rewatch/reread Oda's original so you can see how that story is going. As far as I know, he is still coming out with new chapters from which you could get inspired from. You seem pationate about this story, so once you get some inspiration, you should have no trouble continuing the story. Good luck to you, please post something soon!
| Guest chapter 31 . 2/20
Please continue the story, I'm finally getting into fanfic and yours was one of the first I read. I want to know how it ends.
| Uraharaisgod chapter 4 . 2/9
...why is it everybody ignores his new abilities? I mean, Buggy didn't even realise he had a Devil Fruit until after Moeji told him about it...BUT THIS WAS AFTER LUFFY EMERGED FROM A FREAKIN PUDDLE OF BEER! How the hell did he not realise Luffy has a Devil Fruit power after he emerged from a puddle that couldn't be thicker than an inch and uppercut him?! And how did he figure that Luffy had the same powers as him?! No two fruit share the same power!
THIS MAKES NO SENSE!
p.s it's not "Spirit" it's Haoshoku Haki...
| Uraharaisgod chapter 3 . 2/9
...okay, big mistake, you had Zoro actually pleading for Luffy to cut him free initially? WTF?! Zoro is there specifically to tough it out and annoy Helmappo, there is no way in hell he would ask to be freed by Luffy prematurely, you had him begging to be released one second, only to be back to his actual stoic self the next second.
That did not happen in canon.
What did happen was very simple, he noticed they were there, then told them to get lost because they were bothering him. He did NOT ask, nor bargain (which you put!) to be released.
| Uraharaisgod chapter 1 . 2/9
...? Tashigi cut Usopp's head off? Why depict that? Smoker and Tashigi are well known as followers of Moral Justice rather than Absolute Justice, and one of their greater convictions is to not kill their enemies, but rather capture them to face trial for their crimes. Why on earth would she pretty much execute Usopp? Hell, she doesn't even view them as too much evil, being shown as willing to cooperate with them in the face of a greater evil before.
I just can't see her being responsible for killing one of the Strawhat's in that manner. Also, she wouldn't even bother with Usopp, she still has her personal vendetta against Zoro, she would ignore him in favour of getting the swords off Zoro.
| Guest4737454777 chapter 1 . 2/2
It's like you are mixing other anime with this one. I'm not saying its bad but if you are going to make a ending to a story make sure it relate to the whole story. One other thing... Your story seem a little dark to the real anime. It's good but just not what I'm use too.
| jdboss1 chapter 31 . 1/30
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/28
Please update, I absolutely adore your story, and it's been 3 years... *Clicks "Post Review" with bony grandma finger*.
| Guest chapter 30 . 1/25
| jetserpent chapter 31 . 1/24
Reached the end of this series, and just wonder where it's gone ;( i have come to neeeddd this series... im getting withdrawal symptoms already D:
| Jet1 chapter 20 . 1/23
EPIC JUST EPIC :D
| minekoanime chapter 31 . 1/16
Please update! I have became IN LOVE and ADDICTED to this fic! so please finish this fic! don't leave it please!
| Jacob3399 chapter 31 . 1/14
Plz tell me u intend to keep writing stuff like this. I promise u if I was a publisher I would make this a book. I can't wait to see if you continue this "one piece" if nothing else ever.
| Ace chapter 31 . 1/6
it seems that you haven't updated in 3 YEARS! i really hope you can update soon because i really really really really love this fanfic and hope to read more soon. I've only started to read your stuff this year or last year you can find out by finding all reviews from the end of 2013 and the beginning of 2014 by Ace. so love all your chapters and please update soon
from your NU 1 Fan
PS: i'll reread the will of d soon
| Lover's Red Rose chapter 28 . 1/3
Seriously! Who's the freak who keeps stalking Luffy?!