|Reviews for Feito no Hana|
| Nara375 chapter 7 . 3/29/2013
I have liked the history!
Thank you for writing!
It likes trio Nanoha, Fate and Hayate. Is interesting.
| Left.al0ne chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
| Raven666Raven chapter 6 . 2/3/2011
i like the story very much but i would also like to read the lemon version can you please send it to me pleasseeee...
But really the idea of all the aces together rock.
please continue writing awesome fanfics.
you're one of my idol your writing skill rock like it never rock before...
| deltatale chapter 7 . 8/4/2009
Absolutely gorgeous piece of writing.
Loved White Dev ... I mean Nanoha, loved Fate, and loved Hayate!
I even got upset that I couldn't find this piece earlier!
| Teresa Kaiju chapter 6 . 12/8/2008
Fate's sudden jealousy at the beginning is a bit of a stretch after all the confessing Fate did to Hayate... Then Fate coming up with the idea of the triad seems a little off too. I would expect that to come from Nanoha... But maybe that's just my own view of the characters... Still I do like the ending.
| Templar of Shurouga chapter 7 . 11/24/2008
Only a snippet of the real one, huh?
*Keeps an eye alert to her mail account in the meantime*
| yagoo chapter 7 . 11/23/2008
I've already read this on AS, but I couldn't comment it, because I don't have an acc there xDD (I'd do one, but it's kind of.. embarrassing x.x My english isn't very good either)
And whoa, nice epilogue, I liked it. For a moment I thought that Hayate won't accept such proposition, but considering that IS Hayate... Damn, I don't know what was I thinking xD
I'll be looking forward for your next... fic-crack-whatever xD
| Major Mike Powell III chapter 7 . 11/23/2008
Well, well, soldier...
No smex? Damn it!
Anyway. I liked the mix of Serious!Hayate and Tease!Hayate.
And a body sandwich! N-I-Ce.
Nice work, marine. I liked this.
'Til next time.
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
| Spikesagitta chapter 7 . 11/23/2008
there so need to be more of this pairing-
goodness..it ended...aww im kinda sad now...
| Rockomaniac chapter 7 . 11/23/2008
Too lazy to log in, Mr Blackmailer.
Send it to me when ur done with it.
I will pm u with my email.
Send it or kick the bucket 10 times over !
ROckomaniac, awaiting your next MGLN fic fervently.
P.S i do have some ideas of my own, but since im too lazy to write it, i will suggest it to you in the pm...
| DarkKnightCecil chapter 7 . 11/22/2008
Great ending to a good fanfic...moe Fate FTW! XD Oh yeah screwed up my email too...Im such a dunce lol so please send the full thing to shadowwarrior1 (arroba) ? Sorry for askin again..want to get the full experience. Again cant wait for your next work keep em comin!
| Syaoran Li Clow chapter 7 . 11/22/2008
I loved the original version of this epilogue.
You made me want to keep reading about them, about this “couple” (I don’t know what word to use with them, “threesome” it doesn’t quite felt right to me).
I already said my opinion, but again, excellent work.
| DarkKnightCecil chapter 6 . 11/22/2008
Damn another great story. You got my attention from Shard Card now I keep an eye out for your stuff. Heh what better ending for the three Aces than to be together XD. My Email is shadowwarrior1 (arroba) cant wait for your next work!
| 2100 chapter 6 . 11/22/2008
It really is the polygamy solution? No... I kind of wanted for Hayate to say no to Nanoha. To say she loved Fate only. But I mean... there's still a tiny chance of that, right? Your story has made me realize that I only like Nanoha, really... when she's with Fate and also that I hate seeing Fate sharing or being shared.
Haha... I suppose in most stories, I think "Nanoha, don't you dare love anyone other than Fate. D:
| Templar of Shurouga chapter 6 . 11/20/2008
Words can't describe this. It is a dream come true.
I don't know if you accept requests, but... Have you heard of the Sono Hanabira series of visual novels? Did you consider making an AU fic of Nanoha, Fate and Hayate where they were just normal girls who go to the same school?
Just by looking at this one, I can tell you that it would turn out gorgeous.
I had added you to my author watch after Shard Card, but now, you're certainly becoming a favourite.
(P.S: Will PM you my email address later. ;)