|Reviews for Stay|
| OrangeJellyfish chapter 11 . 2/21
Yup, i cried
| OrangeJellyfish chapter 10 . 2/21
| OrangeJellyfish chapter 3 . 2/21
The feels...i already knkw im gonna cry at some point ;-;
| OrangeJellyfish chapter 1 . 2/21
Lemme guess, the wife is bubblegum-bitch
| narutoheartsme chapter 11 . 12/31/2015
You know, I was very hesitant about reading this. When you, the author had wrote that this was based on a song I immediately searched up the music video online. I knew that the song would tie to the storyline and I wasn't wrong. The meaning of the song was a major warning to me along with the genre you inserted (romance and angst). I was rambling to my brother if I should read it and he would give me an answer but I would say no to it. Finally he got mad and told me to read the dn book and to get out of his room ( he came to my room later to say sorry and that if I can refrain from interrupting his gaming). Anyways I read this story and wow. I was hurt by Sasuke's actions and frustrated with Naruto's. But I held through and I am so happy that I did. Most of the time I would be disappointed that Sasuke and Naruto didn't end up together but that wasn't the case here. I liked that Naruto finally started to love his life, a life without Sasuke. I am happy with the ending and I feel no need to read the sequel because the author ended it on good note. Yeah Naruto is with someone other than my otp but this story was good and REAL. I loved it. So thank you for writing this. (Because I am a bit curious on the actual ending I will be reading right after I finish this review)
I recommend this story to all. Even if you don't like That Sakura is Sasuke's wife or that in Naruto ends up with Gaara, it's a great read!
Thank you! Please continue to write more Naruto Yaoi stories if you can!
| Star World chapter 11 . 8/10/2014
This is a wonderful story, written by a truly talented writer. My best wishes to any other story u may write
| Xyra Kaze chapter 8 . 2/3/2014
I can really imagine Gaara being so formal because he feels out of place! A dat? sweet man!
| Xyra Kaze chapter 7 . 2/3/2014
YAY! GAARA! Gaara can make naruto feel better! Kiba was soooo going to have a heartattack or put in an abduction case my the police! LOL
| Xyra Kaze chapter 6 . 2/3/2014
I was waiting for this mental breakdown. I really did cry when naruto said he was alone and that he needed sasuke! It sounds more like an addiction than love in my opinion, so maybe being cut off is better for him!
| Xyra Kaze chapter 5 . 2/3/2014
I can't believe that kiba would do something like that, but i'm glad that it gave naruto a wakeup call, he really needed it! At the end i actually thought that sasuke was going to like shoot naruto or something...
| Xyra Kaze chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
I wish i had someone to bail me out of work like that! the teasing between these two is really sweet. Naruto is really just going to work himself into a depression!
| Xyra Kaze chapter 3 . 2/3/2014
The song for this story is really amazing! When i read the first two lines of the story i got really excited but then i realized that it was just a flashback and then yeah... i don't think i would be able to stay calm if i bumped into the woman that the love of my life married.
I feel soooo sorry for naruto and sakura actually, because neither of them deserve what sasuke is doing to them!
| Xyra Kaze chapter 2 . 2/3/2014
I'm glad that naruto and kiba are actually friends in this story! There are so many where they just fight, but i really like this better! Sasuke is such an ass for doing this to poor little naruto!
| Xyra Kaze chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
I was actually very weary of reading this story and i had to have a long debate on whether to read it or not, but i am extremely glad that i did! I almost started crying when Naruto begged sasuke to stay, i could practically feel the emotion dripping from it! One more thing is that i adore the car that you chose for sasuke! By far my favourite car!
| YAOILUVRGRL chapter 11 . 10/3/2013
Aww...such a happy ending. I actually like the idea of GaaNaru. In the anime/manga they both had similar pasts, they were both jinchurikis, not to mention they look cute together. Don't get me wrong, I still love SasuNaru, and it will always be the bestest of the bestest, but I still find pairings like GaaNaru, KibaNaru, or KakaNaru cute too. I even like yuri parings like TemarixXxTenTen and TsunadexXxShizune. I'm bisexual BTW and I believe that love knows no race, color, or GENDER. I was raised in a home where my family took Christianity to the EXTREME. And I came out to my very religious mother when I was 14. I really don't get this hatred against homosexuals. If God was a god of love like Christians claim, then he would recognize LOVE when he saw it, don't ya think? It doesn't matter if guy on guy or girl on girl goes against nature. If they love each other with the entire core of their being whats the problem? I swear I gotta get out of the conservative south, and move somewhere where people are more accepting, and aren't so judgemental. Everybodys a critic these days I tell you. Anyhoo...sorry for my rant. I can honestly say though, I did enjoy this fic. Sasuke was kinda a prick in this one...wait...when is he not a prick?! XD I'll admit it is hard to come out of the closet especially if you have not one person who is supportive to the idea of homosexuality around. I honestly can say that I could relate to Sasuke's fear, and hesitation. But I grew a pair, and I didn't just COME outta the closet-I BUSTED out, holding a rainbow flag, and waving it proudly in the air! And that's what Sasuke should've done. You can't have your cake and eat it too, and this fic is a perfect example. Naruto wanted Sasuke, and I believe Sasuke wanted to be with Naruto, and not just for a Friday night shag. But he was ashamed, and didn't want his image ruined and people constantly ridiculing him for his sexual preferances. But...because of his hesitance, it caused him to lose Naruto, and surprisingly I'm satisfied with that. Like I said before I'm a fanatic yaoi fangirl, and a HUGE SasuNaru shipper, but GaaNaru is also just as adorable. *fangirl squeal inserted* I also feel kinda sorry for Sakura. I have mixed feelings about Sakura. I don't hate her, but I do find myself disliking her at times. In the beginning, she was a complete bitch. And Ino kinda peeved me off too. They stopped their friendship over a guy? Who doesn't really give a damn about them or any other girl for that matter. But why do they like Sasuke? I don't really see it as love even if they do claim to love Sasuke. He has good looks, he's intelligent, and that body would even make a preacher go DAAAAYUUUUMMM! Even I can admit he's hot. But that's all they see. And theirs more to Sasuke than just his handsomeness. They swooned over him just like all the other fangirls, because to them it's not about love, but how good Sasuke would look on their arm. It's all about being the one to end up with Konoha's walking wet-dream, and fighting every other bitch that gets in their way just to make sure that dream comes true. And I find that disgusting. Sakura's changed a little since the first Naruto. But she is still completely blind that Sasuke isn't exactly the boy she used to know. He tried to kill her for Heaven's sake! And she's still in love-or excuse me infatuated with him. Naruto is the only one who at least got to know Sasuke, and even though what started as rivalry, and competition, it soon turned to friendship, and they formed a strong bond together. When I first started watching Naruto, at first I thought Sasuke was asexual, but the closer he got to Naruto, the more it seemed like-dare I say it love? Out of all the other rookie-nine brats, or anyone else besides his family, Sasuke only ever expressed strong emotion with Naruto. And with the battle that went down at the valley of end, it played out like a romantic tragedy between two lovers. Keep in mind at the time I had no idea what shounen ai or yaoi was. And even though I had no clue about it at the time I couldn't help but get the feeling that Sasuke and Naruto were maybe slightly attracted to each other. I would always go " do they like, like eachother or something?" I'm surprised most people who watch Naruto don't really notice it. Or either they're in denial because they are shippers for SasuSaku, NaruSaku, or NaruHina. I didn't even know shounen ai or yaoi existed, and I could still tell they had feelings for eachother-and not the brotherly kind either. But I soon discovered shounen ai and yaoi, and became hooked. And the more I watched Naruto, the more I noticed the shounen ai vibes the show gave off. C'mon, you'd have to be a complete idiot not to notice it. That's when I found out from the internet, that K. Masashi, creator of Naruto, and Naruto Shippuden wanted the anime/manga to end with Shounen ai between Sasuke, and Naruto. He even said in an interview that SasuNaru was his favorite pairing, and he even collected doujinshis , and other items of them. Honestly it would make sense to put them together at the end. The bulk of the anime/manga basically focuses on their relationship with eachother, and the struggles each boy faces. So yeah...I hope that the haters don't change Kishi's mind about ending Naruto Shippuden with shounen ai. I swear though Naruto is just so... soo... KAWAIIIIIIII! I just want Sasuke or SOMEBODY to rape him! That's sick isn't it? I know. But I can't help it, Naruto needs to be ravished, roughed-up, corrupted, aaannd punished severely for being so madda puckin adorable! Nobody should be that cute, it should be a crime! I don't see how people can see him as seme either. He's too naïve, and his energetic, fun-loving, easygoing yet feisty personality reminds me of a bubbly uke. Not to mention he blushes a lot! Maybe not as much as Hinata, but he does do it more than the other males in the series. Oh my Goddess I'm ranting again! I am terribly sorry, and again I enjoyed your fic. I will be reading the sequel, but ONLY if you finished it. I hate when an author creates a fic, then does a sequel and not finish it! It really grinds my gears man! But yeah this was an awesome story, and I actually liked the GaaNaru ending. I pray that doesn't change in your sequel...aaaannd it's been good but I gotta go now. It's late and I gotta work tomorrow. Thanks for the great read _