Reviews for Guarding It All
Mkitkat chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
lolz and what fell from her heavenly lips? Shit! that was funny I think you did a good job on the diffrent POVS
abballer1996aim.com chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!
Yuki-Kowareta chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
o:

is all i could say.

:3

and EPOV was perfectly fine (:
4everKiaRosemeryRoss chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
You should keep doing both
ShadowsDaughter chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
woah AWESOME! haha hm i like BPOV better.
Dark Shining Light chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
I like Edward's pov. keep it up! Update ASAP!
lynn1642 chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
Write more, more, more! please! I liked Edwards POV, don't give up on it just yet :)
Chris chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
Ha! that was funny.

"And what word fell from those heavenly lips?"

"Shit."

If I was I Bella, I would start going off on a string profanaties followed by something along the lines of "Damn it Aro you are so dead." I would be fuming and suddenly stop and say lets go. I would then continue to fume silently until I got back to the castle and was done with the tour. All the while wearing a pleasant but noticable false smile. I would not stop being pissed until I was safely in my room then proceed to cry. But that's what I would do if I were her.

I say you did a good job on writing EPOV I honestly enjoy both his and Bella's. Ha lol, I still love that part "Shit." Don't give up on writing Edward's POV! I love reading those!

Good Job!
NotSoSuperGirl chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
ROFL this should be interesting POST ASAP PLEASE !
MikaZuki Blood-AngelofDarkness chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
IF U DONT FRIKEN UPDATE SOON A FORK WILL BE THROWN THROUGH UR THROAT! LOVED IT! UPDATE SOON! Edward's POV was simply amazing. No OOC warining for u. NOW UPDATE CAUSE THAT FORK WILL BE COMIN FOR YA!
makahias chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
love this story can't wait for next chapter
TheGirlOfManyObsessions chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
Oh! This is getting good!
Chris chapter 3 . 10/28/2008
Sounds good to me. I rather enjoy listening to what Edward is thinking.
Midnightxoxo chapter 3 . 10/28/2008
i love edwarrd and i think ed pov would be great!

mwah Emma
Poor little rich kid chapter 3 . 10/27/2008
EPOV sounds good

i like this story so far, but it is kinda dragging on a lil bit.

but other wise its totally fabby :D

iloveyou-er
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