Reviews for Lallybroch!
Wendymypooh chapter 1 . 3/23
A wonderful short story...I enjoyed reading it.
penny4him chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Very nice. I like how you convey the depth of their emotions! Well-written and good descriptions.
Arianna 24 chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
write more please i love the Jamie and Claire's story its just soo romantic
silverflight8 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
A hushed and touching story.

Suggestions: the word 'wame' just looks out of place. I think it's because you didn't use any other Scots words, and it's just there by itself.

A few commas wouldn't come amiss-you've got really long sentences!

Loved the ending. Well done.
LitRaptor42 chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
You tend to have some run-on sentences, but all in all I really like the fic, especially Young Ian coming home. *squee* Can't wait for the seventh book!
Loisen chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Oh i love diana gabaldon's books. the first one is the best. thank you for the stories. :) And please write more.