Reviews for Just Hold Me
coppercat100 chapter 15 . 3/28/2013
UPDATE!NOW!
kitsukami chapter 15 . 10/9/2011
sigghhhhh so sad that u dont have NE more chps yet... watevs off to read other stuff
kitsukami chapter 14 . 10/9/2011
U HAVE TO UPDATTTEEEEE! nexxxx chappppttteeerrr!

yayayayay i 3 reading thissss

you could kill off a main character... not a part of the flock, but like katie or jeb or dr. martinez or ella or something... get rid of katie shes too... bleah
kitsukami chapter 4 . 10/9/2011
ooook... i SO knew that u were gonna add action... (not) ... cool chap.
Kitsukami chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
WOOOOOAH! that was awesome

im under the legal age too, howsabout that!

you could do more stuff about erasers or deathly battles or whatever, max coming back barely alive or something and them crying, maybe... more about iggy.
Flygrrl chapter 15 . 8/6/2011
update! This story is really good and I'm interested in finding out who's sibling Katie is.
Flygrrl chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Maccas? Do you mean McDonalds?
nightblackk9 chapter 15 . 2/25/2011
If you don't already have an idea for who Katie's sib should be maybe Iggy's? And possibly have it be where the stuff the white coats put into Fang really didn't wear off but had a timer on it so he becomes completely sex crazed later on? And possibly have Max get injected with something in that medium too? Maybe some time where Ella and Iggy are alone? Just some idea's hope it helps. :)
bookworm chapter 15 . 12/27/2010
Please continue to UPDATE! This story IS interesting.
love-life.live-love chapter 15 . 10/29/2010
Hi, great story. Update soon, y'know what that was gonna be it but I love it when I get a long review so I will give you one. Right, firstly I think Katie, should have wings or something, but they start to grow like Total's wings y'know in the books. Secondly story's great, and I love the amount of Fax intimacy. Fax/Mang just rocks! Don't you think. Thirdly, umm Update soon. And finally, come read my story for Maximum Ride! review please! Thanks! _
physics chick chapter 3 . 2/18/2010
excuse me? as in like, love love?
KiraKia chapter 5 . 12/27/2009
35,0 feet?

If you read the third book it says the highest Max went was only 31,0 feet -.-
StalkerOfFang's cousin chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
WOW! You never told me you were THIS good at writing! This is the first of your storys i've read, but i'm sure that you are an awsome writer. By the way, you may want to mention when this chapter occurs so that it's easier for readers to understand.
branflake727 chapter 15 . 11/16/2009
the 4th...that was when you updated last... yes i am doing bad on MY story but i am just to lazy to type it all out( but not enough to comment on a couple things)

i have fallowed this story for a little while now. i am in 8th grade and i am SO sorry if i am being a nag. to be a good role model to a highschooler, i will go type my story now (or maybe not, [my chareters:Oh YES You will Brandi, otherwise we will give you WRITTER'S BLOCK! Mwahahahahahahaha!] NO! JK!) next time your on look at my story ok?

and in all seriosness i REALLY do like you story. and i think i just wrote on now... : )

-Branflake Out.
Proxima Centari chapter 7 . 11/13/2009
Oh my Jashin! Jashin is the god Hidan of the Akatsuki from Naruto worships! Oh my Jashin is also one of my friends and my personal jokes. One day, my best friend all of a sudden said, "Oh my Jashin!" Ever since then, it's been an inside joke. When I saw you say it, I almost freaked out. It was seriously scary. By the way, love your story! Maximum Ride is my favorite book EVER. I love it!
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