Reviews for Twenty Four Hours
Motherof8 chapter 21 . 3/21
Great story. Interesting and funny. Thanks for writing it.
Motherof8 chapter 19 . 3/21
Gee, what a cliff
Motherof8 chapter 18 . 3/21
Nice twist
Motherof8 chapter 17 . 3/21
How could he not choose bella?
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 3/21
Motherof8 chapter 8 . 3/21
Great story
Motherof8 chapter 6 . 3/21
Aww. Poor
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 3/21
Funny story
Motherof8 chapter 2 . 3/21
There's a saying, be careful what you wish for. Lol poor edward
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 3/21
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 21 . 6/18/2013
Amazing story! Aww... I really loved the last chapter. I think in the original series, he really needed to realize that Bella accepted him for who he was... actually, the whole relationship was messed up. They say marriages take work, and I'm sure that theirs will need a lot of it after the end of BD. haha that would be a funny story. *clears throat* I got a bit off topic. Anyway, I love how Edward eventually understood Mike more, though he was a bit OOC. He could have been having lots of fun with Bella if he were exactly the same person he was in the original series, if you know what I mean. ;) Hm, let's see. I also love how Jessica was OOC. She's a character that's fun to play around with because, given what we know about her from the origionals, we authors can have lots and lots of fun with her. ;D Seriously though, it isn't hard to mold her into whatever. Those are the things that stuck out most to me.
Keep up the amazing work! ;) (:
Tarah xXx
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
AHAHAHAHAAHA Edward Newton! ROFLLMAO I'm Cracking Up! :D
WithoutLove.LifeIsLike chapter 21 . 3/7/2010
So good! I stayed up way too late to finish reading this! lol
t.watson148 chapter 21 . 3/6/2010
Alright. My review for this, well lets just say, amazing story. First off, I personally dont ever read. It takes a lot of effort for me to sit down and read a book. With that said, I decided to give this story a shot. See why everyone liked it so much. I was a little skeptical at first, Twilight characters and the whole not liking to read thing. However, as soon as I sat down and began reading...BAM! So much just comes flying at you. So many twists, so much action, so much suspense, not to mention the amazing love story going on. There were crazy cliff hangers just waiting to torture you at the end of every chapter. Completely insane if you ask me, but then again, I just couldn't stop reading it. I had to know what was about to happen in the coming chapters. Now remember, for someone that doesn't fully enjoy the pleasure of sitting and reading, this story was great. I loved every minute of this story. I highly recommend this story. Super fun, adventurous, romantic, and hilarious. Now on the read The Storm... :)
meghan chapter 21 . 8/15/2009
yay! that was amazing. i was so happy it completely fulfilled all my expectations, and it inspired me to start writing again. wow, i am so excited to read other things you have written. :]
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