Reviews for Twenty Four Hours
HannahSwan chapter 2 . 7/12
O.M.G!
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 11/22/2015
Good story
Motherof8 chapter 21 . 3/21/2015
Great story. Interesting and funny. Thanks for writing it.
Motherof8 chapter 19 . 3/21/2015
Gee, what a cliff
Motherof8 chapter 18 . 3/21/2015
Nice twist
Motherof8 chapter 17 . 3/21/2015
How could he not choose bella?
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 3/21/2015
Funny
Motherof8 chapter 8 . 3/21/2015
Great story
Motherof8 chapter 6 . 3/21/2015
Aww. Poor
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 3/21/2015
Funny story
Motherof8 chapter 2 . 3/21/2015
There's a saying, be careful what you wish for. Lol poor edward
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
Ha,,,Newton!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 21 . 6/18/2013
Amazing story! Aww... I really loved the last chapter. I think in the original series, he really needed to realize that Bella accepted him for who he was... actually, the whole relationship was messed up. They say marriages take work, and I'm sure that theirs will need a lot of it after the end of BD. haha that would be a funny story. *clears throat* I got a bit off topic. Anyway, I love how Edward eventually understood Mike more, though he was a bit OOC. He could have been having lots of fun with Bella if he were exactly the same person he was in the original series, if you know what I mean. ;) Hm, let's see. I also love how Jessica was OOC. She's a character that's fun to play around with because, given what we know about her from the origionals, we authors can have lots and lots of fun with her. ;D Seriously though, it isn't hard to mold her into whatever. Those are the things that stuck out most to me.
Keep up the amazing work! ;) (:
Tarah xXx
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
AHAHAHAHAAHA Edward Newton! ROFLLMAO I'm Cracking Up! :D
WithoutLove.LifeIsLike chapter 21 . 3/7/2010
So good! I stayed up way too late to finish reading this! lol
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