Reviews for Devotion
Guest chapter 26 . 1/17
Hi there :) I finally find this story that I began to love back then in your blog. As in the past years, I still love this story so much. I love the way you write about the characters, I love the deep feelings, the way you talk about love and loss, but with hope in it. Of course I would like that you write faster :P But I know also that inspiration -and life- is a bitch. What I wanna say, most of all, is: don't abandon it. Please. It would break my heart. I want to know how the story ends even if it will take years! (but I hope not ' even if I know that the story probably will be still long and I'm happy about it!)
Anyway thank you, thank you for this beautiful (this beautiful is a rare thing to find) story.
seikkyokuka chapter 26 . 11/18/2016
Thanks for updating!
Le Confidant chapter 26 . 10/23/2016
I'm glad Winry is considering things, and I'm also glad Paninya is keeping her company. I hope Izumi sends that she-devil flying back to Central.
Guest chapter 26 . 10/20/2016
You have a way of making these two characters so tangible it feels as if I could reach out and touch them they're so real. I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
nicolepalmer chapter 26 . 10/18/2016
so happy you came back! :) looking forwards to reach more chapters!
coffeelovingfangirl chapter 26 . 10/18/2016
I screamed when I saw that you updated; and I've gotta say just the way Josephine thinks makes my skin crawl; Winry quick get back to Ed so you can protect him!

I hope you update sooooon...no pressure
nicolepalmer chapter 3 . 10/5/2016
Its going to be almost a year since you last updated D: im very sad! :3 hopefully a new chapter will pop up sometime! hehe take care!
The god Falter chapter 25 . 9/25/2016
So far i love what your doing in this story, how ever my biggest concern is it dead...? It has been a very long time since I have found a really good fma story such as this one, your writing really is good, i think i have seen one maybe two grammar mistakes or spelling. I like how you made thi ngs play out surounding Alphonses death, the only thing i would like is for ed to lash out and yell at winry about how she hurt him even more, because im an ass and like to see my opt suffer then be happy and sprinkle in a bit more suffering... pleasr let me know if its still alive...

Pls
ellamariexx chapter 25 . 8/25/2016
Please tell me a new chapter is on its way...actually I wouldn't mind a few new chapters. You're an incredible author and I love that through your stories it feels like FMA is still going. If you don't believe me the countless other reviews echo my same sentiments :)
Nicole chapter 25 . 6/28/2016
I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter! :) i love this story!
KorraPanera chapter 25 . 5/26/2016
This is really good! The writing is phenomenal, and the story is so heart wrenching. You need to continue! This story needs an ending. It's been a few years since you've updated, but I hope you do so again soon. You're a talented writer. Please, continue.
Ash N Brock chapter 25 . 1/30/2016
This is a great, touching and well-written story. I like how you aren't rushing Ed's detoxing, the description of the detox, Ed's despair, how you incorporate all the different characters, and the new ones, and make it seamless. I particularly like your take on the Roy/Ed interaction, it's refreshing and rather in character. :) Looking forward to the next installment, and hoping it's soon!
Celtika82 chapter 25 . 12/29/2015
What a sad, intriguing, well written, awesome story. I think you are portraying broken addiction very well. It's hard to read about a shattered Ed. But you've done it in such an addicting way.
Rumia35 chapter 25 . 10/20/2015
All I can think is, awhhh Edward! :( I just want to hug him!
Le Confidant chapter 25 . 10/12/2015
I'm glad that Ed decided to stop running although this might change again (you like to keep us at the edge of our seats). The fool needs manacles, don't care if he's injured XD

And that narcissistic psychopath needs to back off. I pity the other OC who's dealing with her now. She's a man-eater.

Great update! I can't wait for the next one.

~LC
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