|Reviews for Devotion|
| Sokkasm chapter 18 . 12/10/2013
This is the end? Well, you did write 'end', but still!
It just seems like this could have so much more!
| Chibispaz chapter 18 . 12/8/2013
this is a beautiful story and despairingly sad and I would love to read more of it if you have it in you to write 3
| Ishte chapter 18 . 10/5/2013
End? What do you mean end? Sweetness top me the story is just getting started here... End?
| ViolaHarmony chapter 18 . 10/4/2013
I'm so glad you remember this story, because I remember it, too, and I'd just about given up hope on ever seeing an update. I'm so glad you updated, even if it was short... Does this mean we'll maybe get more in the nearish future?
This is such a frustrating, horrible, wonderful, emotional, stunning, powerfully written story. It's drama/hurt/comfort, so I'm hoping the "hurt/comfort" means that things will turn out sort of okay and Ed and Winry will realize how much they need each other and love each other? *sob* And will Winry ever realize that Ed only distanced himself from her because he thought that Winry was better off without him? And Alphonse essentially said that Edward didn't deserve Winry and took advantage of Ed's absence by starting to form a relationship with her. All while Ed was busy being impaled and almost dying in Baschool! Gahh! It's all so frustrating. And even if I do understand where Al was coming from, he makes me so mad in this story. You probably didn't intend for me to be mad at him, but I can't help it! Maybe it's just the rabid Edwin fan inside of me. Every time I see Alwin I always think, "AL! WHY DID YOU STEAL WINRY FROM YOUR BROTHER!?" Even when it's totally not fair of me, I can't help feeling this way. Sorry, you probably think I'm nuts! :'D
Oh, Izumi! I hope you're right!
| Le Confidant chapter 18 . 10/4/2013
I don't see this story marked as "complete" so that means that the " end " at the bottom is there as a placeholder of sorts.
However I do hope you finish this as I hope you finish Marking Time. Both are equally amazing in their respective way and it needs completion (and we readers need closure).
| Pia Bartolini chapter 18 . 10/4/2013
I'm glad you haven't given up on it - this and Marking Time are my favorite incompletes in your repertoire :)
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 18 . 10/4/2013
Thank goodness an update! I loved this story but thought you were done with it. I do hope you continue to work on it, it's an excellent roller coaster of turmoil. Also Marking Time is onei would love to see updated!
| ecmwrites chapter 18 . 10/4/2013
End? I don't like that. It's depressing.
I hope you keep this going! This is such a teaser, but a good one.
| ecmwrites chapter 17 . 6/17/2013
This is really interesting. Hope you update soon!
| FireHazard101 chapter 17 . 2/11/2013
So I have a friendly suggestion. How about you update? Yeah, that would be a great idea. I can't believe I thought of this. Wouldn't it be great if this amazing story continued? Huh? Just think about it. Hard. VERY HARD.
| FireHazard101 chapter 16 . 2/11/2013
| FireHazard101 chapter 15 . 2/11/2013
What did she say?!
| FireHazard101 chapter 4 . 2/11/2013
Um, huh. Ok then.
| Cecilia Haunt chapter 17 . 12/23/2012
Wow! Eds seriously screwed up! This is an amazing story cant wait for more!
| Joker Oak chapter 17 . 11/19/2012
I'm liking it, it's been a little while can we get so,e updates please? I really wanna see what happens next!