Reviews for Path of Thorns
elfrowen chapter 3 . 2/5/2009
You know, when I saw that this story had been updated the very first thing I did was squeel with joy. And at the end I sighed with contentment.

You did a wonderful job.
Eternal Eyes chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
Boy I sped through this chapter, it was just so exciting! I love your stories, they always leave a lasting memory and make me want more of it! Hope you can update soon!
Shadow Girl chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
I wonder why Kenshin can't talk...? But you sure as heck won't tell us until we read it. :P Saitoh is finally here! Yeah! I can't wait to read the rest. I find all of your plots so interesting that as soon as I finish reading one chapter, I'm waiting for the next one. :)
Erroneously chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
I really, really heart Misao in this - protective and kickass. Great job ;D
animeLCgrl chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
This chapter is all heat and hotness, seriously the animalistic Kenshin is completely enticing. I really do hope that Kaoru solves the curse thing though, as much as I love the predator in Kenshin I totally love his thoughts and words. _ Misao is like always the awesomest ninja best friend that anyone can ask for.

I am curious as to who is the little girl's laughter in the wind who is definitely helping Kaoru out in the magic department. Also how did Kaoru all of a sudden get magic? Anyways those questions will only be answered with lots and lots of new chapters. Well you said this was going to be a short story so perhaps a couple new chapters, so please update.

Also one little mistake that you made, I think you forgot to delete a part of a paragraph or added an extra one:

"The sound of the main door opening caught her attention and she curled her fingers into the pages before looking up. When she did, her heart started hammering in her chest.

She wasn’t certain how long she had been thumbing through history books when the sound of the door opening and shutting caught her attention. Clenching her fingers around the spine, she turned and her heart started hammering in her chest."

Anyways a little typo I hope to read some more soon!
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
Chapter 3:

Omfg that was.. omg.. Epic man. As always your stories are of course. But srsly.. wow.. Love Kenshins way to communicate- Idk if Id have the will power to do what Kaoru did! Lol. But of course its Kaoru! Loving your version of beauty and the beast- its very original although the plot is from that story. I cant wait for the next chapter ) Until then Ill read your other kickass stories!

Ari chan
Scarylady chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
Yay for more story! Reading a new chapter of this makes my day :D Hm...what *do* those super dark red roses represent?

Oh, I did spot one rather amusing error: "At his breasts was an insignia that had Misao biting back a curse." Erm, unless Saitoh has changed sex for this story, I think you mean "breast." :)
bluerelic chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
glad u updated!

your story is getting really interesting, and a bit frustrating cos I don't know what's going on, but that's the point of a story at the beginning anyways .

i hope the next chapter tells more about the curse, it's killin me! :D
XinnLajgin chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
Oh I'm going to enjoy this, things are about to get a lot more interesting.
RubieRedSlippers chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
I haven't even read this chapter yet-but I know it's going to be awesome. I'm just so psyched that it's here. I'll give you feedback in a momento once it is read.


I just read it! It was fabulous, just as I predicted it would be. Especially because it looks like there's been positive progression on the KxK front. Keep up the good work! I know you're busy, but these always make my day. )
JadeEye chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
Ack, and here I thought we would get some answers. Happy to see that the relationship between Kaoru and Kenshin is progressing. What happened in the garden, how did Kaoru fix it? I really love this fic so keep up the good work!
katdemon1895 chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
i agree with kenshin, grumpy kaoru is adorable, your characterization of kaoru is fantastic and i love that you weave the kenshin group in with all sorts of fun fantasy elements

misao in this story absolutely rocks and i love her

definately looking forward to whenever you update next
Lizzy44 chapter 2 . 1/27/2009
I love this story! You put such a cool twist on beauty and the beast! It's really fun to read. :D
Soniya Himoura chapter 2 . 1/19/2009
no why int the world did u end it there! man the next chapter please!1soon!ahh!
SerpentsAttire chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
Beautiful, as always. I would certainly like to know where you come up with your wonderful ideas. :)
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