|Reviews for Rebel Without a Cause|
| The Only Pancake chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
"Clearly, we’d misunderstood each other somewhere."
That line made this fic so much better, lol!
Good one-shot :P
| cshorte chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
| roxymar chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
That was awesome
a boyfriend having the same diet as a mosquito~~
hope you write more!
| truehazel chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Hmm. I actually really loved this. I know people are always going on about how the first time ought to be so wlow and gentle, and maybe it should be for some, but I don't think it matters all that much. The first time is important but it's not lik eif your first time isn't perfect your life is incomplete.
So, thank you for giving us a desperate need-you-now lemon. I always love those for some reason.
| Highlands chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
210: Small mistakes:
"I iwas/i still mad at him."
"It felt like he really iwanted/i me, and that was utterly exhilarating."
'“We iare/i going to do the wedding night properly,” he said.'
| NubianGoddess chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Well really needs to stop being so prude and overprotective. I mean, seriously. Very nice lemon here. I really enjoyed it. Keep up with the good work.
| pippapear chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
An out of control Edward ...
... who could possibly resist?
| Sunflower33 chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Wow! A twist, some hard core Edward losing control. Luscious!
| twilightobession chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Gril you are on a role. You can write stories for me ANYTIME! You are one HOT and STEAMY writer and I love it. Keep on writing...and...I will be waiting. You go girl.
| elphabacy35 chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
This is good!
| TWD chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
more more more more more more more more more more
| meike.k chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Woah, that was really well written and I absolutely loved to read it.
| jenjan24 chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
WOW! That's all I can say about this one.
| PhantomsAngel1988 chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
| limona chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Very nice one-shot.