|Reviews for Distraction|
| twilightfan chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Great writing. Very hot but also convincing that this is really Bella and Edward. Also, I appreciate that you proofread it so well. (Very few things are as frustrating as spelling and punctuation errors, in my opinion, when you're trying to focus on the plot.)
| Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Haha, that was great! Pretty funny, too. Good job. (:
| sugar rae chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
| Airekel chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Very nice! :) This is my favorite so far of the short stories you have written. I liked that it was post Breaking Dawn, and I love Edward in a feisty mood. Go figure. It's nice when he let's go of "his tender, gentle side!" *g*
| Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
| elizabethan chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I enjoyed this - nice to have a canon one-shot post BD. You are a terrific writer - hope to get more Twilight stories soon!
| Ironic Twist chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I was sure that the threat was a subterfuge perpetrated by Alice and Bella to get Edward to loosen up. Glad I was wrong because I hate it when I figure out the twist before the end. This was fun!
| TwilightLoz chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Lol this is rate good.. You're writing is so good.. I could actually imagine that LOL. :L x
| browneyednerd chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
THAT WAS HOT. I'm sorry I can't be more coherent. I'm too busy imagining Edward naked.
| wsimms chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Oh my gawd! That was so hot! Incredible sex scene!
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
that indeed wuld be a welcome distraction...
| Starshinedown chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I can't believe I haven't reviews this yet.
The lemony goodness is excellent, of course, but what I like best is Bella taking Edward out of his head for a moment, moderating his proclivity for over reaction and brooding.
A lovely one-shot! Thank you.
| Debora Black chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
although you could have focused a little more onde volturi decision to go back...
| lindyrb chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Oh yeah...I figured once Edward got past his hangups, he'd be insatiable! Sigh...yet another thing he does better than human men...
| jojo1997 chapter 1 . 1/22/2009