Reviews for Distraction
twilightfan chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Great writing. Very hot but also convincing that this is really Bella and Edward. Also, I appreciate that you proofread it so well. (Very few things are as frustrating as spelling and punctuation errors, in my opinion, when you're trying to focus on the plot.)
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Haha, that was great! Pretty funny, too. Good job. (:
sugar rae chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Hotness
Airekel chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Very nice! :) This is my favorite so far of the short stories you have written. I liked that it was post Breaking Dawn, and I love Edward in a feisty mood. Go figure. It's nice when he let's go of "his tender, gentle side!" *g*
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
Awesome!
elizabethan chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I enjoyed this - nice to have a canon one-shot post BD. You are a terrific writer - hope to get more Twilight stories soon!
Ironic Twist chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I was sure that the threat was a subterfuge perpetrated by Alice and Bella to get Edward to loosen up. Glad I was wrong because I hate it when I figure out the twist before the end. This was fun!
TwilightLoz chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Lol this is rate good.. You're writing is so good.. I could actually imagine that LOL. :L x
browneyednerd chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
THAT WAS HOT. I'm sorry I can't be more coherent. I'm too busy imagining Edward naked.
wsimms chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Oh my gawd! That was so hot! Incredible sex scene!
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
that indeed wuld be a welcome distraction...
Starshinedown chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I can't believe I haven't reviews this yet.

The lemony goodness is excellent, of course, but what I like best is Bella taking Edward out of his head for a moment, moderating his proclivity for over reaction and brooding.

A lovely one-shot! Thank you.
Debora Black chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
GREAT ONE!

although you could have focused a little more onde volturi decision to go back...

thankyou
lindyrb chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Oh yeah...I figured once Edward got past his hangups, he'd be insatiable! Sigh...yet another thing he does better than human men...
jojo1997 chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
wow!
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