|Reviews for Is there anything stronger than friendship?|
| UltimateNario chapter 1 . 12/7/2016
Some typos, but other than that, good!
But, I was listening to "Feels Like The First Time" By Foreigner with this.
Sorry to be rude.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2016
I loved it! please make part 2!
| Jenna chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
Did i just masturbate cause i read this story .
| Something super chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
I even went hard myself!
| Linzey chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
that was beautiful almost cried
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Piece of SHIT
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Great story! Loved it! But I think you expressed Lucas and Ness' love a bit too elaborately. Great job though!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
What? Kirby showed it to him? Kirby is a puffball baby marshmallow thing! I would expect someone like Marth or Snake or something, but Kirby?
| RosesBleed131 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
This is a very nice story! I love NessxLucas and Pitxike and you just combined it all up together! The funniest this in the story was "Umm...Kirby one showed me those porn movies" I laughed so hard when I read up the good work
| Puggie chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
You should write another!I was very into this story!
| Madamdragon chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
You should definately update this story and make another one on how they are doing and the obsticales that come their way.
Great story. Who doesn't like Ness/Lucas pairing? They are so cute together and definetly deserve to be updated. Hope you think about it and make a decision. But please update Please I'm begging and would love to see what happens in an update. Oh Please!
| alataya chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
MOAR, PLEASE WRITE M0AR
Thank you for giving ness x lucas love!
-i love how those two didn't really know what they were doing x3
-Why the hell was Kirby watching a porn movie? XD Perfect abliby for him, why would a innonce little puff ball watch a porn movie, hell, you can't even call him a boy. XD
| Arei Aoitori chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Awesome, great story. Glad to see another into the NessLucas pairing. It was and adorable story, and the consept was good.
Of course, though, I have a few things I must state. Like mention before, it did feel rushed, putting in a little more details could fix that easy. And, this is just me, but the ending was killed by horible choice of words. It's just me mostly , I'm a stickler for how things are worded. Some grammer stuff, but if English isn't your first language then it fine, nothing that really ruined the story.
But, great job for your first fic. Sorry if I sound harsh, I just try to help. Hope you write more with these two in the future, it's hard finding decent fan-anything with them. Good luck with future projects!
| Seles Wilder chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Hi, I like your story, though, all happened too fast.
I can see one mistake, Ike's sword is called Ragnell, not Ether or something like that.
Hm, one more thing, I can't imagine Kirby showing a porn movie to a little kid lol that surprised me.
Well, that's all, keep up the good work