|Reviews for Knowledge is Power|
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 10 . 2h
It is the scene between Ron and Milicent that shows why 'Proud Parents' re-envisions this tale better.
Here this is Statutary Rape, in effect. Yes, with both minors it might not be so legally. Still, what she did and continues to do IS sexually abusive. She does in time fall in love with Ron and he her, but it still leaves a bad taste in the mouth. Huge BOOS to the twins, who do nothing in Ron's support.
By contrast, 'Proud Parents' shows the development of a fully consensual, and reciprocal relationship. I look forward to seeing it blossom and grow.
Of course, the action involving Snape, Dumbledore, and the TriWizard, is expected and the bad guys will get it in the end!
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 6 . 9h
One of the pivotal chapters in this story. Now that they have pulled Voldemort's funding and his most effective followers outside Azkaban, his threat is still real, but hugely diminished.
One point that needs to be held in mind is that they are already in Italy. this, was missed by some reviewers. Therefore, it will be easy for Remus to, buy the firearms and accessories in the State, say and bring them to the Mannor.
One can think that Dan is being hostile (like several reviewers), but I see it as someone who's had his entire existence rearranged and is trying to find his feet. In fact, Emma sees rather too accepting of the fact they will be married. Maybe this is only a bit of sexist stereotyping on Robst's part, or Emmahas drawn more from Hermione's letters than Dan.
The MAJOR task, at this point, is getting the Horcruxes destroyed. THAT is how Remus earns his pay, along with Sirius' help.
Draco's predicament basically shows the DeathEater mentality on a small-scale.
| MotekElm chapter 29 . 7/16
overall good revenge Harmony AU with evil Dumbledore and stupid Weasleys. should be rated M for implicit sexual situations (nothing explicit). a bit fluffy/silly overall
| jackmylad 2 chapter 23 . 7/16
I live in Scunthorpe
| MotekElm chapter 13 . 7/15
mostly fascinating, well written AU from 3rd year on, but 2 things really bother me:
(1) wedding/sex for the 14 year olds, although time travel makes them 18, it keeps referring to them being in 14 year old bodies and being 14
(2) RonMillie non con situation
| MotekElm chapter 4 . 7/15
I love the powerful HarryHermione setting everything right
| MotekElm chapter 3 . 7/15
| jackmylad 2 chapter 9 . 7/15
love the piss joke
| gginsc chapter 30 . 7/9
Lovely story! Voldy the squirrel! Hilarious.
| gginsc chapter 9 . 7/8
| Heart chapter 25 . 6/29
Millie! *vomits* Ugh. Slugs. Ugggggh. Well. He was one Quirrelmort. Now he's upgraded to SQUIRRELmort! Hahahhahhahaaaaaa~ Joan, you precious human being.
| Heart chapter 24 . 6/29
Oh that was hilarious.
| Heart chapter 23 . 6/27
| Heart chapter 19 . 6/26
| Heart chapter 18 . 6/26