|Reviews for Cold|
| BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 2 . 10/29/2008
Damn...some big, bad & powerful stuff you have here, xfirefly9x. Summarizing Mal's emotional stoniness in such a way is, I think, a difficult process because its too easy to have Mal mentally justify his behaviour as simple expediency or completely opposite to what it really is, instead of taking this road and admitting he's hardened something fierce.
I also have to say I like the two alternatives given for Mal's final thought on his situation. While I personally think both are valid, in that one comes from an earlier or later point in his life AFTER the Unification War...you definitely capture the duality of knowing you're hard after living through things a person should never have to experience.
| angelfangrl chapter 2 . 10/23/2008
You're really good at writing. Both versions of the story are great (even if I don't really know who the character is, because I've never seen Firefly either).