Reviews for Labour of Devotion
WordsMusicMagic chapter 22 . 7/20/2024
I liked the story idea but for some reason I had trouble understanding what was happening and what the timeline was. Is it set in England or the US? How much time passes throughout? Is it a dystopian society in modern times or a period piece? I guess I would just liked to have seen more plot and character development. Thanks for your contribution!
Mona69 chapter 22 . 8/26/2023
Still love readying this.
princeselisa chapter 22 . 11/3/2022
:)
NickChick22 chapter 22 . 10/13/2022
A very cute, sweet story! I love period fics, so a great find! Anxious to read more from you both! Happy writing!:)
Mona69 chapter 14 . 5/27/2021
I like the story. It just seems that everything happened so quick as far as them having time to fall in love. It is a short story so I understand.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/5/2020
This story makes no sense. She's his date and his maid? C'mon! (For one thing, he would have a valet, not a maid.) And he never would take a servant to a party. Ridiculous premise.
Jesstew chapter 22 . 8/5/2020
I loved it
Jesstew chapter 8 . 8/1/2020
I did not see that coming.
Guest chapter 22 . 5/23/2020
Good Story
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
Guest chapter 11 . 5/22/2020
The lemmons was woow
twilightobession chapter 22 . 11/10/2018
I have truly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
twilightobession chapter 21 . 11/10/2018
Another perfect chapter
twilightobession chapter 20 . 11/10/2018
Love love love this chapter.
twilightobession chapter 19 . 11/10/2018
Edward does love her. You can tell in his actions
twilightobession chapter 18 . 11/9/2018
Wow, what an emotional day for both of them.
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