Reviews for Labour of Devotion
Sheethkal Shahar chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Nicely written. I love Bella and Alice together, and you write them very well in this context. I can't wait to see her meet Edward again, under the circumstances of the party. Rosalie is very well written in this story by the way. As for Edward I'm sure that he really doesn't take his maids for whores, he's just a jerk for certain reasons that we'll find out. Can't wait. Loved the chapter, can't wait for more.

Love Middi~
Migs4JasperWhitlock chapter 4 . 11/2/2008

cant wait for the next chapter
Rosette-Cullen chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Lovely. - You write so prettily, I like reading them all over again.
Marie Meyers chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Man, it was soo getting good! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Nudge-LostintheDark chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
This story is so different from the other stories I've read, but it's still amazing! I really like the different plot (i think that's what it's called) in this story! It's fabulous!

Anyway, away from the gushing and praise, I have one question. What time period is this story set in? I think it's earlier than the 1900s, but there was one detail in the first chapter where I might be wrong. It said something about Bella standing by or behind a cargo truck... I'm not trying to be rude or anything. I'm just trying to figure out the time setting...

I really can't wait for the next chapter. This story is amazing so far. I can't wait for Edward to stop being an ass!

**LoveEmmettCullen 0.
SexyKnickers chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Great 2 chapters. Edward was so mean but then again theres a double meaning in it. Anways please update soon

AnnaBellaJones chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
I like when you write Alice and Bella together. I also like the scene of this story so far. I like what you two are writing and can't wait to read more!
I'myoursweetestgoodbye chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Awe, I love that Alice is still so sweet to Bella even though she is a servant. I can't wait to read about the party!
OhCamilla chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
this just gets better and better!
xXEdward'sStupidLambXx chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
I really enjoy this fanfic. Keep it up!
bluebaby3296 chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
wow...bella's probably thinking, i was bought to b a servant not wear nice girl!
vix2020 chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Alice embraced me, wrapping her tiny arms around my waist. I sobbed shamelessly into her shoulder.

Aww! Poor Bella! :( This was a very sweet chapter. And its great to know that Edward is clueless about women. ;)
latuacantante4him chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Hm...Edward doesn't have a "lady" to escort to the ball? I can't wait to see his reaction to Bella and what happens when they dance.
InLustWithEC chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Hmm very interesting. I wonder the real reason edward bought her. Can't wait to see them interact together.
LolaluvsEdward chapter 3 . 11/1/2008
Really good so far! I can NOT wait for the second chapter! :)
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