Reviews for Surprises
Bee's Bookshelf chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
HOLY FUCKING HOT! I'D LOVE TO SEE HIM DOIN THAT IN A FILM! HOT DAMN!
youngandmature chapter 2 . 7/6/2010
Very, very good.

You do dirty talking Edwarrd well.

Though I'm curious, in your story is it the same as SM's? Does B still fall in love with J as well? Whether yes or no, on the Twilight timeline where is this taking place?
x chapter 2 . 7/6/2010
that was HOT!

please continue..

i'll admit i did a little touchin' myself reading this (;
Kenzersmom chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
incredibly HOT! WOW! love your edward! shower please!
moonhoney2 chapter 2 . 6/17/2010
Very OOC, but I LIKE this Edward. So hot!
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 2 . 6/12/2010
These two chapters have been wonderfully painstakingly tortuously HOT and delicious! *Sigh* Thanks for writing this and I sincerely hope you add to this again soon!
Ms.LadyOfCalibre chapter 2 . 6/12/2010
...WOW...
denisemexicana chapter 2 . 6/10/2010
I love this story.
Analitica chapter 2 . 6/2/2010
i really loved it please update soon
TheNicciLove chapter 2 . 5/31/2010
:)
vanessathp chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
If only Breaking Dawn was as explicit as this when it came to the honeymoon chapters. You've done a fantastic job with this. And although I would love it if you updated frequently, I realize that updates only happen when the author finds his/her inspiration.

Thanks for writing!
Ms.Lovett'sSmutShop chapter 2 . 5/16/2010
hooot! :D
flojo03 chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
what a tease edward is, this was so hot when they finally get to do it stars will be everywhere!
flojo03 chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
oh this was so hot... think I need a cold shower now
nonoza chapter 2 . 5/12/2010
ur work exibits 2 thungs that are seldom seen 2gether: smut and taste. update pleeeez
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